Directed by Billy Gierhart
Written by Maurissa Tancharoen & Jed Whedon
A somber, very creepy May focused episode has the team investigating a mysterious force revolving around Hannah Hutchins, a quality control inspector at a particle accelerator that exploded on her watch. While investigating the mystery we are treated with several versions of the origin of the Cavalry and a closer look at what makes May tick. We are also “treated” to a prank storyline involving FitzSimmons with Skye as their target. Throughout the episode there are allusions to broken people and things along with the repairs to these people, things and problems.
The episode opens with Hutchins buying paper supplies and milk at the Batesville Roxxon gas and convenience store. The clerk recognizes her as someone who was at fault for killing his friend Jack Benson. Right when he starts to threaten her cans start flying at the clerk, and she denies making it happen. The clerk runs outside to find the gas pumps pouring out gas, and we are shown the interior of the store with the woman praying and asking for it not to happen again.
Ward and May are together in the hotel the morning after events of last episode. I guess that answers that question. More than just talking took place over that prop whiskey the night before. May gets a call about a new assignment, and while Ward is going over the plan on how to get back to the plane, May is already gone.
Skye’s hacker skills are, apparently, less valuable to SHIELD than her ability to understand people. Coulson wants her to pay special attention to the Indexed Asset Evaluation and Intake to find out whether or not Hutchins has telekinetic powers. Skye is happy to take the job, but rejects the name. It’s probably good that they didn’t use an abbreviation (IAEI) for it when they approached Hutchins. She would have assumed they were from her union, with more questions about the explosion.
Coulson brings along May and Ward to talk to Hannah. Hannah’s house is surrounded by upset townspeople and local police. While Coulson talks to her the crowd gets rowdier, and a car with no driver starts driving towards the crowd. The local sheriff is understandably upset and points his gun at who Hannah, assuming she caused the car to drive, somehow. Before things get out of hand May takes it upon herself to tranq Hannah. This doesn’t phase Coulson, but Skye and Ward both seem pretty freaked out by it.
Back on the plane Hannah is locked up. Coulson and May go talk to her to see what is going on. Hannah thinks she is being punished by god and he no longer protects her from demons.
FitzSimmpons remembering their fun times at the Academy decide to tell a highly exaggerated account of The Cavalry’s origin. Their story involves riding horses and hundreds of deaths.
The team is together discussing Hannah’s apparent literal demons, and what might be causing them, as someone stands in the background watching them. When I first spotted them I thought “aha! So, there are other people on the plane. Maybe, that’s who drove FitzSimmons to the spot earlier.” And, then he disappeared and the frights began.
May denies Skye’s request to talk to Hannah. When May is telling Skye that Hannah has to be locked up one of Coulson’s nick nacks gets thrown to the floor. Skye complains to Ward about May’s hard assedness. Ward defends May, and tells Skye to cut her some slack. He gives a new version of The Cavalry’s origin. His version has 20 trained assassins and one pistol.
Skye finds evidence that there was one worker who complained about safety deficits twice before the explosion.
While Simmons is investigating the explosion we’re faked out with a bit of silly creepiness as the screen goes to Fitz in a gas mask. Fitz leaves to get some equipment and a mop. While gone Simmons sees what she thinks looks like a window on the explosion. While looking at it the ghost appears and shit gets way creepy as he says “FROM HELL” in answer to her question about where the window leands and breaks the fancy computer with a wrench. He then turns the plane’s power off which forces the plane to crash land.
Skye volunteers to let Hannah know the good news that they are being attacked by an outside entity and she is not at fault. Skye lets her know what is going on, and does her best '70s guitar wielding nun impression to let Hannah know god wouldn’t punish her. God is love, she says, he wouldn’t punish a mistake, he would forgive a mistake. May overhears this and seems to enjoy the message as well.
FitzSimmons, based on what they saw, and the word from Thor realize that window was between an alien world. Simmons speculates that this is the answer for many ghost stories. Is this a possibility for Caspar/SHIELD crossover episode?
FitzSimmons go to repair the power station that was destroyed by the ghost. The ghost shoves them into a room and Ward comes to the rescue. He has trouble fighting the ghost, since it keeps disappearing.
Finally, Coulson gives Skye the accurate May story. Coulson and May were a part of a team that was trying to investigate a powered individual. Followers of the individual took a civilian girl and a few agents hostage. May went in and took out the enemy force and when she came out she was a different person.
The ghost shows up and threatens Coulson and Skye, saying “Let me in or let her out.”
May is in a room alone and senses the ghost.
In what may be the best scene in the series so far, i(n fact, the rest of the episode could have been the team playing war and I still would have rated it highly because of this scene) May is in a room. The lights go out. We see the ghost in the background. The lights go out. May is alone and sensing something. The lights go out. The ghost is right behind May about to swing his wrench. The lights go out. May is gone and the ghost is swinging at air.
May used his time of confusion to get Hannah and escape the plane. She is using Hannah as bait to lead the ghost away from the plane and her people.
Skye figures out that Tobias Ford (who it turns out, is the ghost) isn’t out to harm Hannah, but is protecting her, because he liked her. May comes to the same conclusion during their fight, when he makes himself vulnerable to save Hannah from a falling log. Tobias admits what he has done, and May gives her the tough love speech that Coulson gave her to enable Tobias to let go and leave Hannah alone. Tobias holds Hannah’s hands and allows himself to disappear into the alien planet, or hell. Whatever it was.
Skye goes up to the cockpit and offers to keep May company while they take off. May doesn’t say no. At the end of the episode we see Fitz with his face covered with whipped cream. After everyone denies the prank May is shown in the cockipit with a smile on her face. I guess she is fixable after all.
I thought this episode was effectively atmospheric and creepy, while doing an excellent job of telling May’s story. I thought a lot of the prank stuff fell flat and felt stupid, but that was made up for by the fact that we got to see May smile, and more importantly by the scene where Fitz absolutely screams at the mop prank he made. Other than that, though, almost all of the attempts at humor seemed a bit forced. After last week’s laugh riot, I think this can be forgiven.