I hope this doesn’t violate the rule about no seeking answers for homework. In a few days I will be sending in my grad school application. I was hoping to find a doper(s) who work(s) in college admissions who might be willing to proofread my Personal Statement and tell me what I might do to improve my chances, or if i’ve made any glaring mistakes or missteps. For example, am I hitting all the important points admissions folk look for, etc. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks!
Actually, I do work in college admissions. However, I don’t even touch grad school things, and we don’t require an essay to get in. We look at 2 things: Is your ACT 18 or above? If you have a 17, were you in the top half of your class? If either answer is yes, you’re in.