It’s not really homework and I’m asking for assistance and critique, not someone to do it for me.
I’m thinking I’d rather PM it to someone than post it here.
Mods- OK?
Feel free to PM it to me, though I can’t guarantee I’ll be of any help. Let me know stuff like deadlines, etc, so I don’t blow it off too long. 
You definitely shouldn’t post it here in case somebody runs it through a plagiarism check and it pops up from this site. 
That’s what I was thinking :eek:
You’re welcome to ask. We updated the FAQ a little while back to state this, though there is still a bit that says don’t ask people to do your homework for you:
I am an ex-college prof and I have helped with grad school admission stuff via the board in the past. E.g., there was a poster who had made many posts I openly admired and so on. So it wasn’t really a random doper.
The member contacted me via PM and things went from there.
But right now I have Other Matters to deal with.
Done. You may not like what I had to write.
(OK, I’m really just saying that last for the peanut gallery here. 
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Thank you!
I’ve scored standardized test essays since 2001 so I’d be happy to read it as well.