Challenge the Writer II: The story (long)

Okay, in this thread I collected words to use in a short story for a writing class I’m taking. It’s taken three-count 'em-three Cosmopolitans (thank you Dopers! for getting me turned on to cocktails, instead of boring old beer) before I have the courage to finally post this. I’ll have to post in two or three posts as it’s too long for one. I could qualify away, but I’ll let the story stand, except to say, I know the title sucks (insert appropriate expletive her). Thanks for the help, guys and gals. :slight_smile:

Clarissa’s Birthday

“Such bellicosity from a child!” Elisabeth cried. “Tell me, why are you so quarrelsome?” she continued softly, regaining her composure quickly.

“I am not quarrelsome Mother, nor am I a child! I am sixteen years old today and as big as you are.” Clarissa petulantly stomped her foot for emphasis.

“You will always be my child Clarissa. Do you understand me? Now go, before I send for your father.” Elisabeth returned to her reclining position and continued her reverie, staring out the window at the spring garden. Clarissa skulked away, only her feet expressing her utter frustration in their thump, thump, thump across the floor. Sometimes her mother could be absolutely irksome!

Presently, Evie arrived with a tray of food, Elisabeth’s typically abstemious lunch. There was a small bowl of sliced oranges, a rare indulgence that Geoffrey had produced upon his return from Atlanta. Three jam-smeared crackers, a teapot, cup and saucer, and small containers for milk and sugar stood out starkly on the large silver tray.

As Evie set the tray down she remarked, “It is a wonder you don’t waste away on such a paltry diet, Ma’am, if you don’t mind my saying. You hardly eat a thing, Mrs. Appleton!”

“Oh no Evie, you shouldn’t worry yourself on my account, truly. I’ve never been in better health,” Elisabeth replied earnestly. Turning away from the window, her reverie broken by Evie’s declaration, she poured a bit of milk into her cup as Evie dispensed the tea. She stirred the tea and dipped the damp spoon in the sugar, using only that which clung to it.

Her son Leo was scheduled to arrive on the two o’clock train from Pittsburgh. He was a singularly gifted young man, at the top of his class at Lincoln, and the pride of the Appleton family. Exceedingly handsome and quite the raconteur, his company was highly regarded, especially with the young ladies. Elisabeth hadn’t noticed him favoring any one of them yet, but now that he was home for good perhaps he would be more inclined to settle down.

Penny had polished the furniture to a high luster; the dinner table was set with eight settings, the newly polished silver gleaming in the sun that fell across the table from the west window. She could smell the mutton cooking out back and the warm bread Evie had just brought in from the ovens. Fresh flowers were secured and Elisabeth had spent the better part of the morning arranging them and placing the vases throughout the house. The rooms were exploding with the color and scent of a variety of lilies, red and white roses, yellow and pink irises, lilac and assorted sprays of greenery. Windows throughout their roomy home on Shaw Street were open wide, allowing the co-mingling scents to waft through the house as the light breeze swept through it. Elisabeth strolled through the house, inspecting each room to make sure it was as straight and as clean as could be, making sure it was all perfect for tonight, then retired to her room to make the final repairs to her dress.


Clarissa was incensed at her mother’s insolence. It was her birthday after all, and what did she care that Leo the Magniloquent was coming home? What a bore he was and what a lot of fuss people made over him! As if the American Negro never produced a finer specimen, not one single being so well spoken and erudite, so handsomely magnanimous. What rot. There were plenty of men twice as smart and infinitely more genuine at Howard. She knew because she’d seen them, and once stopped to talk to a young man while taking lunch to her father. The man had been talking excitedly to his friends about a lecture he had once heard about a movement to return to Africa when Clarissa walked by. He leaned into his cohort and whispered something while nodding in her direction. The reply caused him to stand a little straighter, check his tie and smooth his jacquard vest. His heavily lashed eyes were cast downward as she passed.

When she returned the way she had come fifteen minutes later the courtyard was empty of the loud group, just the boy remained, and the occasional bystander. When she passed by him again he called out to her, “You must be the smartest girl in all of Washington, in addition to being the prettiest.”

“And why should you think that?” she retorted, more bravely than she felt.

“Aren’t you Clarissa Appleton, Dean Appleton’s daughter? Everyone knows about your family. Your brother is a brilliant scholar, your father a founding member and Dean of the School of Arts and Letters. You’re Mother, of course, was well educated as a child in New Orleans.”

“And what a lot you know about everyone but me. Have you anything to report about me?” The young man blushed and bowed his head again, his brown eyes so thickly lashed they looked painted. Clarissa could not help but laugh at his obeisance. He was startled by this reaction at first, but soon found himself laughing along. Clarissa suggested they sit on the bench under the large oak on the north side of the courtyard—the opposite corner from her Father’s office—and they talked until the clock tower bell made Clarissa aware that an hour had passed. Her Mother would not be pleased. Preparing to leave she realized he had never introduced himself and was just asking him as he blurted out, “Can I ask you a question before you go? A question of a sensitive nature?”

“I suppose,” Clarissa replied, uncertainly.

“I trust you won’t take offense, I probably shouldn’t ask, but it is a rumor and well, there is just no way to be cordial about it. Is it true what they say about your Mother? Is she really a Quadroon? Is that how she came to have green eyes?” He looked at her expectantly, but cautiously. He knew he was taking a risk asking, but over the course of their hour-long chat she had appeared so open and frank in her opinion and discourse that he hoped she wouldn’t take offense. He felt safer knowing that she did not know his name.

Clarissa was shocked, but deftly concealed it. “No, as a matter of fact she is not. She was educated in New Orleans, you were quite correct about that, but she is originally from the British West Indies. She moved to New Orleans with her Mother when she was very young. I have never heard her discuss her Father. Now, are you quite certain you’ve had enough of this genealogical discussion? I must be going home.”

“Yes, I am. Thank you, Clarissa, for a delightful afternoon. I would very much like to do this again some time.”

“As would I, Mr… Mr… do tell me your name, sir.”

“Happily. Elijah Yates, at your service.”

. . .

She did not look forward to the dinner that night. She was resolute in her enmity towards her mother and especially that rapscallion Leo. She had tried all morning to induce her mother to allow her to go to the Spring Dance at church instead of this grotesque display of son-worship they called Leo’s coming home party, but Elisabeth had steadfastly refused. She was supposed to go to the dance; her mother even took her shopping for fabric and Penny had made a brand new dress just for the occasion, a beautiful dress of deep coral with tiny green brocade vines running vertical, punctuated perfectly by petite yellow roses every two inches and a large yellow bow over the bustle. Evie had been elaborately braiding Clarissa’s thick, waist-length black hair when Leo’s telegram came saying he would be a day late, her happiness impinged upon by what she was sure was his tomfoolery. Her father ordered her to attend the dinner and her mother ordered her to wear her new dress, a double affront since she hoped to debut it at a truly special occasion.

Hearing her father outside, she crept down the hall to the stairs to peek over the banister, hiding behind the fern. Her mother was at the window, peering out. Elisabeth turned abruptly, clasped her hands together and looked up—Clarissa could see her face clearly, the eyebrows arched, the mouth pinched and Clarissa wondered what Leo could have possibly done to earn that look, a look reserved for her and her alone.


The ride there had been pleasant enough, he thought as he wound his way through the afternoon crowd at Metropolitan Station, his head high, proudly disregarding the odors inevitable to train stations in large cities like Washington. Geoffrey was a well-traveled man who was accustomed to the disadvantages of public transport. Nervously twirling his derby in front of him as he walked, he made his way to the platform to wait for Leo’s train, which was scheduled to arrive at two o’clock.

When Leo finally disembarked, Geoffrey quickly approached him with an open arm, but Leo turned away to help an obscenely expectant young mother off the train. Her abdomen was so swollen it appeared she couldn’t even keep her balance, for she clutched Leo’s arm in spite of being firmly on the platform. She was pretty enough; a light-skinned beauty with full lips and bottomless eyes, petite in every way save that engorged belly. Her gingham maternity smock was plain but her straw bonnet had been pinned with an elaborate floral spray, which made her face all the more pretty. Geoffrey was waiting for the woman’s husband to appear, feeling quite good about the fact that he had raised such a polite son when Leo addressed him. “I’d like to introduce you to my wife, Father. Father, this is Constance.”

Geoffrey looked at Leo and then Constance and down to her belly, his mouth agape. He quickly overcame his astonishment, however, and managed to say, “Why, I’m pleased to meet you.”
He absentmindedly extended his hand for a shake, but quickly withdrew it and embraced Constance, gingerly, taking care to avoid her stomach. “Welcome,” he added. “I’m sure my wife will be mightily surprised, but I trust she will recuperate even faster than I have, and will welcome you with open arms.”

On the ride across town Leo explained to his father how he and Constance had fallen in love last summer, married soon after, how this was the reason he could not come home last Christmas and how sorry he was about his dishonesty. Leo’s timid wife sat quietly while Leo and Geoffrey talked and did not appear flustered by Leo’s sudden explanation of his marriage to his father. Still, Geoffrey was a well-mannered man, and he would never ask the questions he wanted to in front of her, not that they necessarily needed asking—the situation seemed obvious enough.

As Leo helped Constance out of the carriage in front of the brownstone on Shaw Street, Geoffrey worried about the dinner party to come. Leo wasn’t even aware of his mother’s plans for a party and it would take every minute of the remaining three hours to acclimate Elisabeth to the existence of her son’s sudden and pregnant wife. He knew she was there in the foyer already, peeking out from the strip of etched glass on one side, he knew she had seen Constance and that horrible possibilities were being created in Elisabeth’s mind even as they moved slowly up the steps with their cumbersome charge. She would be hysterical before they reached the door.

When Penny opened the door, however, Elisabeth was noticeably absent and the white rose boutonniere she had made for Leo that morning was crushed on the floor. Leo looked to his father apprehensively, and Geoffrey made a sweeping movement with his arm, encouraging Leo to go find her while he made certain that Constance was comfortable. Leo stacked their baggage in a corner of the entryway and undertook the stairs en route to his mother’s room while Geoffrey introduced Penny and Evie to his daughter-in-law.

(cont.)

Dr. Gideon arrived promptly at six o’clock. Seldom one to tarry, he had left his own house some fifteen minutes before for the ten minute stroll to the Appleton’s house. As usually, he simply waited around the corner until the remaining five minutes passed. Punctuality was a source of pride for Dr. Gideon, he expected it of his students and he would give no less. Geoffrey welcomed him in, inquiring about the young assistant who was supposed to be in attendance.

“I gave him the address earlier today and I expect he will be along shortly.” Dr. Gideon explained, handing his hat over to Penny as the doorbell rang.

“That must be Mrs. Winston and her daughter. Or perhaps it is your young man.” Geoffrey offered, as he slowly shuffled Dr. Gideon towards the study while Penny answered the door. Geoffrey looked back and saw Elisabeth—radiant in her satin carriage dress, the plum color of it setting off the green of her eyes; her hair swept up to cascade in delicate curls about her neck, around which wound three short strands of pearls connected in front by her mother’s jade cameo— glide down the stairs to welcome the widow and her daughter in an exaggerated manner.

“You really must meet Constance, Mrs. Winston,” Elisabeth was saying, adding far too much emphasis on really, drawing it out an octave lower than her normal tone. “It has been marvelous gaining a daughter-in-law and an imminent grandchild all in one day. Come now, she’s right in here.”

Geoffrey sighed and entered the study, where Dr. Gideon had claimed his regular chair by the window. Geoffrey could not help but notice how the Swiss dots on Dr. Gideon’s burgundy vest clashed spectacularly with the green and blue plaid of the chair as he leaned in to offer Dr. Gideon a cigar. Dr. Gideon declined but requested bourbon, which Geoffrey happily supplied from the sideboard. He was handing the drink to the professor when the doorbell rang. “That must be your young man, Dr. Gideon. Tell me, is he as brilliant as you say? What are his credentials again?”

“The boy is from Nashville, educated there by the widow of his grandmother’s slave owner and attended Oberlin, where his uncle is a professor. His marks there were excellent, his letters of recommendation the finest I’ve seen. He is young, but Howard would do well to get him before he establishes himself in the world, before his expertise proves more costly.”

In the hall, Clarissa answered the door on Dr. Gideon’s young man. “May I help you?” she asked.
The young man stared at her for a long time without saying anything, a blank expression on his slack face. His hat dropped from his extended fingers and brought him back to reality. He replied, “Yes ma’am, it’s me, Elijah Yates. We met last week on campus?”

“Oh yes,” she said, looking at him expectantly.

“I’m here as a guest of your Father’s?” he said, stooping to retrieve his hat.

“Oh! I am terribly sorry!” she exclaimed, sweeping the door open fully and stepping to the side. “Do come in. Dr. Gideon and Father are in the study. The second door on the left down that hall,” Clarissa instructed, aware that Elijah was looking at her and not the hall. She felt terribly happy—unfairly so—her cheeks were flush with it. Leo had returned with a pregnant wife and plans to leave again in a month for Europe, leaving Constance and the baby here. Her Mother was not pleased, was in fact more upset than Clarissa could remember. And now, this boy, this beautiful man in a tailored tweed frock coat was staring at her with the darkest eyes she had ever seen. Perhaps this would be a pleasant birthday after all, she thought as she turned and walked into the parlor, closing the door behind her.


Evie announced dinner and as the two parties collided in the dinning room, Constance’ natural passivity gave way as she exclaimed, “Elijah! Wha—” but stopped abruptly and looked down.

“Do you two know each other?” Geoffrey asked, noting Elisabeth’s eyes narrowing with suspicion.

“Yes, I believe we went to Oberlin together? What was your name again, ma’am?” Elijah inquired.

“Constance—this is Constance, my daughter-in-law,” Elisabeth offered. “And you are?” she asked, arching an eyebrow.

“Darling, this is Elijah Yates. He is to be our newest faculty member. He is a brilliant scientist working on an important study that centers on physiological similarities between races, and comparisons with known mulattos,” Geoffrey explained.

“Yes, yes, it should be fascinating to read when he is finished. I’ve seen the data, he is easily debunking the falsehoods coming from our less civilized quarters, for you see my dear,” Dr. Gideon took Elisabeth’s slender, fair hand and led her to her chair, “Elijah is finding that we are all the same in every way. Our blood is the same, each of our internal organs, even our brain mass is the same. Keep your eye on this young man, Elisabeth, his star is just now rising.”

“I’ve read your proposal for that study, Mr. Yates.” Leo said. “I must say, I found it quite fascinating, though I am unfamiliar with the ratio formulas you are using. Perhaps we could chat about it later?”

“Of course.” Elijah replied, passing a bowl of bread to Dr. Gideon, one eye on Constance. Constance, when she wasn’t looking down, was glancing around nervously and absent-mindedly stroking her abdomen. After just a few bites of her dinner she claimed fatigue and removed herself to the parlor.

“It shouldn’t be too long now, Leo. Have you arranged for a midwife yet?” Mrs. Winston inquired. “I can send for my sister tomorrow, if need be.”

“Thank you Mrs. Winston, that would indeed be lovely,” Elisabeth replied.

“No trouble at all, my dear. I am sure there is so much to do with so little notice. Do let me help you, if I can, won’t you?”
“Of course, but with Evie, Penny and Clarissa to help with the baby, I can’t imagine a need for it. It is very kind of you to offer,” said Elisabeth.

Clarissa, who up until that moment had been intermittently toying with her food and staring unabashedly at Elijah, registered what her mother was saying. “Oh, I see. That is how it is to be then,” she started.

“Clarissa!” Her father frowned, tucking his chin and shaking his head at her.

She was just about to excuse herself when Leo called from the parlor, “Mother!”

Elisabeth excused herself and came back a moment later, asking Mrs. Winston how far away her sister lived.

“She is a half days drive away. Why?” Mrs. Winston asked.

“Well, that will never do then, will it? She is to have the child tonight.”

“I’ve assisted her in the past. With our collective experience, I should think we could attend Constance ourselves. Dr. Ralston lives on the next block, we could always send for him in an emergency.”

Elisabeth paced, considering Mrs. Winston’s suggestions, playing distractedly with her pearl strands. Looking at Clarissa, she asked, “Mr. Yates, would you be a dear and escort Clarissa to the Spring Dance over at the church? You’ll pass Dr. Ralston’s on the way, Clarissa knows it. Would you stop and inform him that we may need his services later this evening. Clarissa, would you be a dear?”

Clarissa wasted no time removing her bonnet and wrap from the coat stand and moving towards the door. She wanted away from this, before they asked her to help, and it was her chance, finally, to go to the dance. The fact that Elijah would be here escort made it all the more appealing.


Elijah had grown terribly quiet on the walk from Dr. Ralston’s residence to campus and, as they passed the oak tree where they first had met, he asked Clarissa if she would linger with him while he smoked before they made their way to the church. She perched on the edge of the bench, laying down her shawl to protect her dress. Smiling shyly at Elijah, she smoothed her dress before placing her hat atop her lap. He lit a cigarette, breathed in deeply while looking up at the tree, and turned to offer her a puff. She nonchalantly took the cigarette in hand and, mimicking his actions, breathed the smoke in deeply. He patted her back as she choked on it, smiling, remembering his own first cigarette.

“Clarissa,” he said, as she swept her hands to and fro in front of her face, clearing the smoke, “I want to talk to you about something.”

Between coughs she managed to choke out, “Oh, and what is that?”

“Clarissa, your family life is about to change, very much, I should think.”

“Oh, but it already has! Leo was God’s own son before he came back with this pregnant woman. It’s simply scandalous! Now I’m not the black sheep anymore, and Mother will have to pay me more respect.”

“Yes, I would imagine she would,” he mumbled.

“What?” Clarissa asked.

“Nevermind. You have to listen to me, Clarissa, your life will see changes greater than that in the coming days. Do you remember when I asked you if your mother was a Quadroon?”

“Yes,” Clarissa replied.

“Why do you think I asked you that?”

“Well, you asked if that was why she had green eyes.”

“Yes, I did. And did you know the answer was yes, that is exactly how she came to have green eyes?”

“What are you saying?” Clarissa demanded, her eyes flashing
alarm as she withdraw from him.

“I am telling you, you were misinformed. Elisabeth is not only a Quadroon; she is not even your mother.”

Clarissa gasped.

“Have you ever wondered,” he asked, “why your mother favored Leo over you? Why should a mother do that? I’ll tell you why. Leo is her son, but you are not her daughter. I am here at the request of your Aunt, your real mother’s sister, who has been searching for you since shortly after your mother died—not long after you were born.”

Clarissa was in a state of shock. She could barely speak, was barely aware of her mouth as she looked at Elijah horrified. “But how—” she whispered.

“Your father met Elisabeth after your mother’s death. After finishing school here in America, he had returned with his young wife to her home in the West Indies. Elisabeth was there after her benefactor, a Mr. Dell, died, leaving her and her young son nothing. His wife evicted them out of her husband’s apartment and Elisabeth’s mother paid her passage to the islands, where she could live with her brother and his wife, and perhaps find work.”

Clarissa was crying by now, her face a distorted morass of skepticism and grief. She was twisting the corner of her shawl just as she had as a child when she grew pensive. She was thinking back across her life, the arguments, the favoritism, it all made sense now. How dim she was not to have seen it before now. But how could she have known? “Go on,” she whispered.

Offering her his kerchief, he continued, “Your Aunt is very interested in seeing you, you know. When they left the Islands with you they did not tell a soul where they were going, or even that they were leaving. Of course, it was easier to assimilate as a family in a place that did not know their history, and of course your father was concerned that marrying a woman with a bastard Octoroon son would effect his chances in academia, and he was probably right with that guess.”

“But—are you here to expose them? Surely my Aunt doesn’t mean to—” Clarissa abruptly stood up. “I won’t have it, not my father, you will not. She will not.”

“Clarissa, of course not, that isn’t my intention, or your Aunt’s, but I’m afraid it can’t be helped.”

“Bu—”

“Just listen,” he cautioned. “I am not going to expose your family; I am simply here to find you and inform you, and to assist you to the Islands if you wish to go. But,” he lowered his voice, “I’m afraid it will be quite obvious to everyone soon. Once the baby is born, that is.”

“The baby?” she asked, her voice trembling.

“Yes, as soon as I saw Constance and Leo together I knew there would be most likely be a problem. I did in fact attend Oberlin with Constance and I learned there that she is also a Quadroon. Do you see?”

Clarissa crinkled her forehead and dropped her shoulders, “No, I’m sorry.”

“Mathematically speaking, Clarissa, your young niece or nephew will be white. If my calculations are correct, there is an 85% chance that their progeny will be able to pass.”

Clarissa sat pondering the fact for a moment, thought back over the years of her relationship with Leo and her mother—his mother—and gently traced the outline of her outstretched hand on her knee. The clock tower bell rang out eleven chimes as she thought, Elijah watching her intently all the while.

Standing, she asked, “This professorship of yours?”

“A ruse,” he explained, “though I am a scientist, and a friend of your Aunts. She and my mother were close friends.”

“And we’ll be leaving when?”

“We?” he asked. “My ship leaves in two days. There is a ticket for you if you should have need.”

She wrapped her shawl around her, carefully placed her bonnet on her head and replied softly, “I think I shall. I think I shall, indeed.”

They walked alongside each other and Clarissa tried to imagine what her new life would be like. She wondered briefly what her mother and father would do now. She did not care to think about it just then. There was only an hour left of her birthday, and she would like to enjoy what time remained.
A.B. Patterson
June 16, 2003