This is not freeverse. This is english. I don’t care if it’s your first, second, or twelfth language, quit doing whatever it is you are doing that makes your sentences and posts so obtuse and hard to read. The spacing is fucked, there’s no discernable punctuation, and very rarely a point, either.
Clean yourself up, man. For God’s sake, have some respect for yourself.
Quit giving us seemingly randomly typed messages. Just quit. If you’re going to type, don’t hit enter after every sentence. Just give it a space. If it’s a new paragraph, give it a blank line between them to clean it up a bit and make it easier to read.
Please, just make it easier on everyone.
–Tim
We are the children of the Eighties. We are not the first “lost generation” nor today’s lost generation; in fact, we think we know just where we stand - or are discovering it as we speak.
::moaning pitifully and reaching for the aspirin::
Oh, that did it. How long will it be before Bj(zero)orn appears? Then we’re really gonna see logic mangled, syntax tortured and a polluted stream of consciousness that gets murkier and more polluted by the moment.
Reading off of a computer screen is different than reading off of a printed page. Long, undifferentiated blocks of text do not translate well to the screen. They are hard to read.
Lack of punctuation, regular sentence structure, and capital letters complicates this problem. I get a headache from staring at the screen trying to figure out what somebody has said.
And if you care enough to post it, I care enough to read it.
I do question your “Have I touched a raw nerve? Wonderful.” comment, however. Are you TRYING to hit a raw nerve? If you are deliberatly trying to annoy people, you might be edging into troll territory.
