A couple of points–1) looking at the issue again, Black Spider is white in my copy on the two page spread on top, but black in the bottom middle panel
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Did you notice that Hal specifically referred to the killer as “Them”?
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Shy Guy:eek: The Jean Loring stuff is a great thought (WAY out of character, but it fits). You’d have to get around the “If you’re shrunk too long and/or return no normal size you explode” bug in Ray’s shrinking equiptment, but telephoning your way in past security is no problem apparently…
CandidGamera-The Wally thing, the Kyle thing AND the Atom thing were the problems for me. Sorry, but Deathstroke just ain’t that good, despite the writer thinking he’s kewl.
And while the Joker isn’t a garden variety madman, he’s still a random, motiveless nutcase (when written at his best) and the Joker could easily get around any silly security system.
Tengu–based on next issue’s cover, I think Jack’s toast. (Also, I understand that several higher-ups in the DC office don’t like the fact that Tim is the only current Bat-character who’s not been…scarred, for lack of a better word. Killing Jack would fix that)
Mockingbird–Given the “Adam Strange Has a Secret Wife In Utah” blurb in the upper left-hand corner of that tabloid, I suspect we’re looking at DC’s answer to the Weekly World News.
Also, as nifty as your scenario is, it depends on Vertigo both knowing and NOT knowing that Hal is the Spectre. If he does know, then he’s not out for revenge against Hal-Spectre, he wants Corrigan-Spectre. If he doesn’t know, then there’s no reason to go after Carol since her super-hero boyfriend is dead.
On the other hand…evil grin…if he did go after Carol, heh, he’d be in for quite a surprise as Star Sapphire kicks his green bi-polar ass to Alpha Centauri.
Mango-I hope it’s not the Calculator-that’s such a damned good concept that it deserves to stick around.
Munch–Mirror Master is actually the second Mirror Master. The first died in the Crisis. The first guy had the ability to all sorts of illusion/reality warping type stuff with mirrors (change Flash so that he physically looks like the distorted reflection in a funhouse mirror, solid light illusions, reversing flash so that his left and right are mixed up so he tripped over his own feet, etc).
One other flaw: I think Metzger made a major mistake when he introduced Zatanna to the storyline. All she needs to do is say “Eus s’yenbid rellik raeppa ni tnorf fo su won!” and poof end of mystery. Hell, even if she can’t do that, she can (and has) say “Tel eht tsohg/tirips of euS yenbiD raeppa!” and have Sue’s ghost tell us what happened. I understand that it would ruin the mystery, but between this and Hal’s lack of participation, we’re tiptoeing near the dreaded borders of an “idiot plot”*–if he hadn’t introduced Zatanna, I wouldn’t fault him for not using her, but by introducing her, he should use her intelligently and as she’s been written.
THis part isn’t a criticism, as much as a sidebar on why this sort of story is difficult in the DC Universe:
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[li]Batman knows and can contact Deadman who’s mentioned to a number of people about the realm of the recently dead–Why hasn’t Bats asked Deadman to chat with Sue? [/li][li]Also, what about Dr. Fate? [/li][li]Jakeem’s Thunderbolt, and about a half dozen others? [/li][li]And they’ve cheated twice (at least) on Alan Scott’s ring’s ability to give life (it was only supposed to work once and it’s worked at least twice, maybe three times), why can’t they bring Sue back? [/li][li]Bats, Supes, Green Arrow, etc knows Rip Hunter, the future robot version of Hourman, and bunches of other time travellers. Why not go back and see what happened? He wouldn’t be able to change things, but he could see who did it.[/li][li]IIRC, isn’t Mr. Miracle still the king of New Genesis? (Or is it Tachyon?) Either way, why not tell Metron to go back and see whodunnit?[/li][/ul]
And that’s off the top of my head–given a half hour, I could think up an easy 30 more. Yeah, these would all ruin the story and I understand why he’s not using them, but it’d be a better story if these things were addressed.
Fenris
*A plot that only works 'cause everyone involved is an idiot.