Death, gently insistent, stands knocking at the door.

“Skin and bones” is no empty expression.
Her skin translucent. Her face beyond pale.
Dust motes drift in the rays of the sun.
She quietly sits.
The clock ticks.
Try as I might, I can’t avoid my reaction.
I am shocked at how quickly she’s become frail.
Time is short, is my reluctant impression.

My mother is 81 years old. Her and my father still live in my childhood home, a little more than an hours drive away. My younger brother, with social and mental problems all his own, lives there yet too. In view of my father’s two heart attacks and damaging stroke, I was always under the impression that my mother would outlive him by a long shot. I no longer believe this to be true.

Troubled by reports of mental instability, which only began to manifest itself since Thanksgiving, my wife and I went to visit her yesterday. There was no extended family Christmas gathering this year due to extended travel, so we hadn’t seen my parents in a few weeks. She has not been the picture of health these last few years, but old age is never completely kind. This is different. My brother has been reporting not only memory loss, but also delusions and paranoia. Hallucinations of other people in the house. Classic stage three Alzheimers Disease symptoms. However, AD takes years to reach that point, not weeks. Something else is going on.

I am literally frozen when I enter the house and see her slumped on the living room sofa. From head on, the first impression is of a skull rather than of a face. She weighs only 85 pounds. She is weak. She lies back with her eyes closed more than open. Thin, brittle hair hangs straight. Slack-jawed she stares vacantly. When addressed directly, she turns her head slowly and responds. A good sign I suppose. But the air is thick somehow. I feel suspended.

My wife is a saint. She immediately went to her side and took her hand, while I took my brother aside to quiz him regarding medications, searching for a change that might explain her recent bizarre behavior. I’m ashamed at this, for I recognize my action for what it truly was – avoidance. I breathe deep and give my mother a hug and a kiss. She is all angles and hard. No softness remains. I am sad.

There is not much for us to talk about. We avoid the topic that hangs in the air. Yet we stay for hours, talking about everything else. When I question my father at length regarding our family tree (a topic I’ve been trying to document), to our collective surprise, my mother occasionally utters a relevant comment. In her stillness, she’s been listening. Then, I am glad we’ve been avoiding the darkest topic.

When we leave and I hug my father good-bye. I look into his eyes, and I see it. I know he knows.

She doesn’t have much time anymore.
Death, gently insistent, stands knocking at the door.

You and your family will be in my thoughts at this difficult time. Please keep us posted.

Is this true? Seems rather poetic for someone feeling the kind of pain you must.

Nevertheless, if this is really going on in your life, I’m sorry. I have several grandparents who’ve been wasting away and losing their facultier for the last few years and it just awful. At least once a week when the phone rings I expect it to be my dad telling me one of them is gone.

… Sorry.

Regretably, it’s all literally true.

The poetry? I don’t know how or why it comes out of me. I guess it just makes the emotions easier to express.

Beautiful poetry, Algernon, but terribly sad what you’re going through that has inspired it.

My best wishes for you and your family, in a very difficult time.

Have a hug if it helps -
{{Algernon}}

Have you talked with her doctor? The exact_same_thing happened with my FIL between Thanksgiving and Christmas. Turned out he had toxic levels of meds. They kept him in the hospital for three days, flushed him out, sent him home. He wasn’t any better. We talked about nursing homes.

And then he snapped out of it. He’s back, albeit even frailer physically than he was before. He also hadn’t been eating and drinking properly for some time, I should mention.

Please please check with her doctors. We had to hammer his HMO for proper care for FIL. Is your dad up to that?

Holding your family in the light. Good luck.

Thanks to all for the warm thoughts.

essvee, a call to the doctor(s) is at the top of my list. There is unfortunately some confusion of responsibility which has to be resolved. There are currently 4 different doctors involved… and I’m not sure they’re all aware of each other. As a consequence, I suspect toxic meds myself. Thanks for your story. It gives one a bit of hope.

Oh, my. That brings to mind what happened to my gramma. The town doctor seemed to write her a new prescription every time she went in for a checkup, and at one point she had at least 15 medications, most of which counteracted each other. Her kids finally got her to go to the Mayo where the doctors cut her down to four prescriptions. I’m still pissed at the man who turned my mentally sharp gramma into a zoned-out druggie for most of my high school years.

Take care of yourself, Algernon.