Just looking for a bit of feedback, positive or negative.
Hey, what’s wrong with Old Mil???
Where’s the blonde’s left hand/arm in the last panel of #1?
I like the faces—totally real. #1 was funny; little less impressed with #2. What are you going to do with these?
Strip 1 was funny. Strip 2 was less so.
I appreciate the feedback.
My fiancee and her best friend do these. They are currently only published in an alternative press newspaper in a medium sized town, and extremely sporadically at that (they’ve only done four strips). Everyone who’s seen the strips around here seems to like them, but I wanted some unbiased opinions. I talked them into doing more, mainly because I think they have a shot at being published in other papers of this sort.
The first is also my favorite, although the second is kind of funny if you know them. They are both sort of avant garde, but still have a thing for Old Milwaukee every once in a while.