Grammar construction question: use of "as"

Which is correct?

#1 - As an experienced pool player, I can usually sink four or more balls in a row.

#2 - An experienced pool player, I can usually sink four or more balls in a row.

I used to think #1, but I’ve seen examples like #2 a few times lately. So, is it #1, #2 or both?

Both are technically correct, but number 1 is preferred. Number two is a bit awkward, but nothing is really wrong with it.

It’s a matter of style; however, I think when refering to yourself, the inclusion of the “as” helps the sentence flow.

If you were refering to someone else, you could omit the “as”:

eg: Jim, an experienced pool player, can usually sink four or more balls in a row.

Using as in the first construction makes the cause-and-effect relationship explicit, which makes it a little redundant in the sentence you give as an example. You would definitely want to use it, thought, if you were stretching cause-and-effect to its limits for some effect.

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