My sister asked me to look over a paper she was writing and I came across this sentence:
For example, a student might ask himself, “What kind of degree do I want to achieve,” or “How long do I want to be in school?”
I modified it to:
For example, a student might ask himself, “what kind of degree do I want to achieve,” or, “how long do I want to be in school?”
Is that correct? Am I missing something? I can’t find my Elements of style book at the moment so I can’t be sure…
Much appreciated. I’d like to notify her if I missed something =]