My first comment was going to be you needed to do a better job on publicity but then I saw your second post.
Okay, going through, some thoughts and observations:
The overall look is good. I like the balance of text and graphics. Nothing too overwhelming but not too bland either.
The phone number is a little confusing. It took me a second to recognize it as a phone number. You’d probably be better off using more traditional punctuation like parnetheses and dashs rather than periods.
The first divider line if not centered.
I assume the mirror text is just filler and will be replaced.
The writing is a little run-on. You might try breaking some of your longer sentences up.
There’s a couple of spots where you typed double spacing.
The side panel looks like it should be links. I tried clicking some of the pictures before relaizing they didn’t do anything.
But as I said above, it looks good overall. Nothing more than a few minor tweaks needed.