I need help editing some fiction...

I’m currently in the midst of writing a story, but it doesn’t seem to flow quite as well as I envisioned it. I need some direction and editing because the story seems to be half baked the way it is. If anyone is willing to help me out, tell me and I’ll email you it.


I would be willing to help out. Email me at swtravlr@tampabay.rr.com.

Email sent.

My uninformed opinion is at your service.


If you need a third opinion…my email’s in my profile.

Email sent.

I think I’m pretty good in the editing department now.

Very first rule: finish the story before editing it. Once you get to the end, it’s much easier to edit. You don’t want to work to get a paragraph perfect and then realize that when you reach the end that it was unecessary.

Write the entire story from start to finish. Then go back to edit.

I’ll keep that in mind while finishing this story and my next ones. Thanks for the advice.