The pervasive use of sentence fragments. By advertisements. It’s annoying. Pretentious. And shows a low regard for the intelligence of the consumer. The pervasive use sentence fragments. Yet another idiotic idea from the world of advertising.
Examples?
I see this all the time. In fundraising letters I get. From various causes. They clearly have been talking. Talking to “marketing experts.” Who’ve told them this style is more “punchy” or “conversational.”
[hijack]Fundraising letters remind me of my own least favorite trend: The inevitable non-postscript P.S. EVERY fundraising solicitation today contains a paragraph-long P.S. How would you have a P.S. in a carefully composed, pre-printed letter? P.S. is what you write when you’ve had an impromptu thought after writing in stream of consciousness. And, it’s usually about a tangential issue, not about the EXACT FREAKING ISSUE just discussed for three pages. “P.S. Orphans are starving in India. But your contribution can really make a difference. Please give your most generous donation in the enclosed envelope.” Well, you fucking moron, if I am too stupid to have figured out that that’s what you wanted from the six times you said it in the body of the letter, why would I get the hint from the bogus postscript?[/hijack]
Apparently you aren’t a fan of the William Shatner Institute of Ad Copy Writing.
I agree. It’s a real. Stupid. Trend.
Of. Use of sentence fragments.
Good old Gaudere.
You mean mink.
We got one, folks! Grab the torches and pitchforks!
bird tuner, I think I heart you. Please join our board. Thank you.
P.S. Pay for membership, mm’kay?
I’m sorry, but are there any intelligent advertising trends?
In 1998, I worked briefly writing material for marketing products on the INternet (I’ve been doing penance ever since). One of the quotes that stood out in my mind was:
Marketing works best in an information-impoverished environment.
Doesn’t that make your blood run cold? it’s like something Dr. Evil would say.
But yeah: marketing trends aren’t supposed to be intelligent. The dumber the environment, the more effective they are. When you start making your consumer decisions based on reliable, objective, relevant information, the marketer is out of a job.
Daniel
Probably why so many retail industries (most notably the travel industry, but the auto retail business as well) have been turned on their ass by the rise of the internet. Something about all of that information right at your fingertips.
I’m with you. If I didn’t know he has stacks of greasy, coke-encrusted hundred dollar bills actually on his desk at work like all ad men, I’d offer to pay for him myself.
Well, hell, if you’re going to go and educate us and all…might as well join up. (P.S. I’m on the opposite end. I work in broadcasting, where we air the commercials and ad copy that you weasels think up.)
Can I ask one thing? That Bank of America commercial that has no voiceover but just graphics on screen, that’s touting how friendly they are to the blind…exactly how the hell is a blind person supposed to know that if there’s no goat-felching voiceover??? Talk about NOT providing information…
You’re absolutely right on the dynamic, and absolutely wrong on the quote.
Yes: the less information is out there, the easier it is to persuade someone to do what you want, the easier your sale will be. That’s because that’s the environment in which your marketing message works best. The more informed people are, the less effective your marketing tool will be; that means your marketing tool will have to be really, really good if you want it to be effective.
But yeah, come aboard–I may quibble with you, but eloquent posters are always welcome!
Daniel
Yeah, we do agree. I’m saying that a marketer ought to prefer to work in an information-impoverished environment, since a little marketing goes a long way in such an environment. That idea has some sinister implications for the mass media, IMO: advertisers ought to be more willing to support shows that ignorant people are watching, and less willing to support shows that encourage critical thought and savvy consumerism.
Daniel
…You’re not also a nihilistic psychologist by any chance, are you?
Damn. Looks like I got socked right in the heart. Le sigh.
My favorite part was reading this entire thread, for the first time, with BANNED underneath bird turner’s name.
Well, hell. What happened? I log on looking for more pearls of wisdom from bird tuner, and I find he’s been banned.