I’m in the process of writing a story, and I’ve decided I need some input. It’s a short story, one of many with the same character, who’s based on me. This is the start of the chain. Email me at libraryalexandria@home.com and I’ll send it over :).
ok, i’ve sent you an email requesting a copy of your story.
let the reviewing begin!
-David
hehehehehh… apperently my Emails seem really formal!
[sub]sorry i’ve taken so long to review, but i really didn’t expect you to send your reply ten seconds after i requested a copy… i was too sleepy to reply then. sorry. [/sub]
well, i rather like the story. it has nice flow, and i like where it’s going. the story has good balance, and i identify with the character. really detailed, too. i have almost nothing to say negatively.
however, i think you made a Copy/Paste error, because the story cuts off mid-sentence, just before jason jumps off the bridgemaze. did you not finish writing it when you sent it to me, maybe? i would like to see it continued…
Yeah, It’s actually not finished yet 
When I was writing that last part, I didn’t feel it was very good, so I set the story aside for a day to get back into the flow. The character’s really easy to write for, because he’s based almost solely on me :).
Thanks for the review!
well, when you get another good bit finished, i would love it if you would send me a copy of the extended version. i really like your story. too bad i am the only one who’s given you any external input…
come on, people, review his story!
I’m out of town for the weekend, but if you send me a copy, I’ll read it when I get back. I’m running out of things to read, and I can’t budget for any more books this month.
I’d be happy to read it and give you my opinion. I can’t really do it tonight, but I could tomorrow. E-mail’s on the way…