Harry’s built up power is, while IMO woefully cliched, still perfectly logical within the story told so far.
But the “super friends” are just .. stupid, especially Molly, Mouse and Murphy. You know, when Mouse is now an entity that can threaten the Leanansidhe, who is considered to be Winter’s equal to the eldest Gruff, well, I wonder why he didn’t simply ate the Naagloshii from the previous book?
And Murphy .. sigh, I get that the “swords” are oh so special but when they can turn a police officer into an expert sword fighter who has no problem whatsoever with all the demands that come with wielding such an ancient weapon, oh well, why exactly did Michael train at all? The sword apparently gives you exactly what you need in ability anyway.
Even if you are just a mortal who couldn’t possibly move as fast as those older vampires that are suppossedly so tough but totally fail to kill some people who are physically inferior in every single aspect – including Molly who doesn’t even wield a godsend weapon, is still an apprentice, not a combat wizard but still manages to kill the kind of vampires that Harry considered too powerful to tackle in an open fight when his days as an apprentice were long gone.
And isn’t a vampire of the white court suppossedly the weakest kind in comparison, definitely weaker than the red ones? And yet, Thomas, the young white, is also unstoppable for the oldest of the reds because .. why exactly?
I do understand that Harry, with his added winter powers, stood a good chance against even the older reds and you could argue that Sanya, one of the “as lucky as the story needs them to be”-knights of the cross, would do well too. But the others shouldn’t have survived the first encounter with the older reds – that they managed to hack their way through them is just ridiculous.
And to get back to the swords for a moment – such devices are one of the reasons why I mostly stay away from fantasy: They can do whatever the author wants them to do, they are the ultimate “get out of jail free”-card and such “solutions” weaken any story considerably.
But my annoyance with the super friends is just a side issue I have with the story in general.
When I realized that the driving force in this book would be the rescue of Harry’s previously unknown little daughter, I was already rolling my eyes.
Of course Butcher had to come up with the most pure motive for Harry to finally give in to Mab, of course it had to be an innocent little girl, of course it had to be family and sure enough, there had to be Harry’s and Susan’s sacrifice and we get the mandatory “heart breaking” scenes in the end. Predictable. Unoriginal. Boring.
And don’t even get me started on the logic behind Martin’s plan. This one hinged on so many coincidences and improbabilities that I am once again reminded of the worst pulp.
This is the first time that I have no interest at all to reread a book of the Dresden Files and I am not sure that I will spend money on the next one; their charm has .. evaporated in the melodrama of Changes.