My first Song!

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My first ever song!

It’s called “Please Introduce Me” and it’s all about relationships or potential ones.

Please tell me what you think.

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I liked it. It has a nice uplifting, positive feel to it.

It seemed to end rather abruptly. I would have liked a longer fade. This might be because I was seeing a movie scene in my head while I was listening.

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Thanks for the reply LongPath!.

Here is my Second Song ever. It’s a completely piano song at this point and it’s called “Onions Always Make Her Cry”. Please have a listen.

http://soundcloud.com/deanc2000/thepunks-onionsalwaysmakehercry

All comments are appreciated.

Dean.