My first web Comedy Video

In My Humble Opinion
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I have been taking comedy writing classes at the Second City in L.A. And had the opportunity to try out their new video for web class. My intent in taking classes was to learn some sketch writing and to meet some people. Then my next level writing class was canceled. They were offering this new video class, and I said, “what the hell.” It has been a fun experience so far, even though I am terrified of being in front of the camera.

Anyway, I have completed my first video, and we were told to show it off on those places on the web where we hang out. And since I have been lurking here for about 8+ years, I figured this is the place.

Please let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BpEmM3ebFfk

Thanks,
Tony

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I didn’t think it was funny. There was a lot of “piss, shit, fuck, douche” and trashing churches and religion, but it seemed more an attempt at hate than humor.

Sorry. Honest opinion.

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No worries. This is some of the kind of feedback I was interested in.