On Poor Children

A nine-year-old girl is found in the stairwell of a crack house in Chicago. She has been repeatedly raped. Her stomach contains gasoline. On her body is the mark of a gang insignia, a pitch fork, made with something like a magic marker.

When she is found she is unconscious. Blood, drool, and semen smear her face. Her eyes, swollen from strangulation, stare bloodshot straight ahead. Even the kindness of death has escaped her.

Her fingers, cracked by brute force against futile resistance, are curled up in weird angles at the ends of her limp, bruised arms. Her chest heaves involuntarily as her heart works desperately to pump a few more times.

The stairwell spirals in both directions, echoing moans and screams that, like the wind, seem to come from everywhere and go nowhere. A light between the sixth and seventh floors flashes bright elecric blue-white, then dies, leaving a dank, horrible twilight.

The tall building is in a row with others like it, in a neighborhood with other rows. The sounds are of busy-ness, of car horns, of shouts, of occasional gunfire. The sights are of bars and broken glass, stripped cars, and people chasing, people fleeing.

The blighted neighborhood is nestled among other finer neighborhoods, where good citizens have paid their taxes and settled their debts with the statistically poor, out of sight, out of mind.

The president is having coffee with a millionaire from an enemy state. The congress is arguing over four billion versus six billion out of two trillion. The judges are deciding what all of it means.

Above the din of American society, amidst a wild and chaotic blend, the lone thought of a helpless girl cries out to an angry God, “Where is my mother?”

Please tell me this is a fictitional little girl. A sketch drawn up to illustrate the ills of American society.

Because if she was a real little girl, and you are using her dead limp, abused body to further your own agenda. I put you approximately one rung lower on the scuz-o-meter ladder than her murderers.

I am sure this is fictional, but I am trying hard to figure out Libs point here.

Jeffery

It might behoove you, Libertarian, to state your point. This sounds like A. the beginning of a short story I once wrote or B. like something out of an issue of reader’s digest asking us to send our 80 cents a day to save a poor, starving 3rd world child.

Got your latest edition of Libertarian News, eh?

I dated a libertarian several years ago. This is the sort of sensationalist tripe that they buy into to prove that Big Government is horrible.
So, what is your point Libertarian?

Do you think that the crimes committed in your little story just happen to the poor?

Not likely - I knew one woman from the middle class who was raped repeatly for several years by her step-father I know there are some regulars on the board who grew up in similar circumstances.

Do you think that crime wouldn’t happen if the government wasn’t addressing foreign as well as domestic issues? Should we concentrate on only one problem until it’s solved? Crime isn’t going to go away, ever. The government can reduce it, but never eliminate it.

Do you think the president is just doing this to have fun? Yeah right - Spending the afternoon with someone who hates your guts is my idea of fun.

Do you think that throwing a slap-dash budget will eliminate poverty? Like crime, poverty is something that will always be with us. In the meantime, the government also needs to provide for the upkeep of the roads, the military, ensure that national laws are enforced, plus many other things that you and I might argue over but our government has been mandated to do them, so they must be done and they need to apportion the money in the best way possible. That they don’t has nothing to do with your story.

Good - your hypothetical child might just get justice.

Unfortunatly such a scenario did happen to a little girl in Chicago a few years back. Such a heartbreaking thing…

Something somewhat similar happened back in, I believe, 1970 in california. A girl was neglected for twelve hears by her disturbed father and nearly blind and physically weak mother until the police discovered her strapped to a chair with (I think) a muzzle on her.

To make a long story (hour-long video) very short, her vocal skills had not been developed, and she had a drunk-like walk. Her grammar and sentence ability never progressed beyond that of a five-year-old, if that. She was scientifically abused by a slew of psychologists and other people. Treated as a test subject instead of a human. Placed in several foster homes, some of which were physically and sexually abusive.

Her name, for those more interested, was Genie, and she died about ten years ago in a home for (I think) retarded pople. The paper discussig her story is named (again, I think) Genie: a scientific tragedy.

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I agree with Libertarian, whatever his point may have been. This is abviously the government’s fault, and not the degenerates who raped and brutalized a little girl. They are blame free victims of society, right?

We should move the blighted into the middle of the finer neighborhoods, where good citizens have paid their taxes and settled their debts with the statistically poor, out of sight, out of mind. Then the honest tax paying people minding their own business and dealing with their own problems can once again be reminded that although they’ve worked hard to get to where they are, they really should feel guilty about it because these other things are going on that are not their fault, but they should feel resonsible anyway.

The President really does meet with foreign ambassadors way too much, trying to keep peace and work out trade deals and whatever. Maybe if he’d been in that neighborhood instead of trying to run the country, he could have single-handedly stopped the punks that committed this crime.

And Congress! Don’t get me started! It doesn’t really matter if the military or FBI or HUD or Department of Education has the proper amount of funding needed, does it? Just take the total amount of money, divide evenly by the number of offices and programs and be done with it, right? Just round off, for crying out loud.

And finally there’s the judges. Damn them for trying to interpret laws and, well, judging. I’m sure these judges can find more pressing things to do than judge.
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[extreme sarcasm] :::applauding::: Like I haven’t already seen this in my line of work. Thanks for coming down from the Libertarian Ivory Tower and pointing it out to a humble street cop like me. [extreme sarcasm]

You write so descriptively. Is this a first-hand observation or an educated postulation? Guess what!? I get to see shit like this a lot. NEWS FLASH: There are average Joes like me out there doing the best we can with what we’ve got. FOLLOW UP NEW FLASH!! We don’t win them all!! I’m far from the political philosophy type, this is why I hang out in MPSIMS, but it’s the humble tax dollars that pay my salary, the EMS techs, the fire/rescue guys, and the social workers that routinely deal with the crap that you pose so “hypothetically”. And we’re not rolling in cash and maintaining vacation homes in the Rockies on what we’re paid.

Well, I’m ranting now, and this ain’t the forum for this. This is the forum to explore ChiefScott’s phobia for bathroom fixtures. Anyway, Libertarian, I’ve never met you but I’ve read many of your posts and they have been very intelligent and well-thought out. I don’t have the horsepower upstairs to seriously debate you on this, but maybe one night you may want to ride around with us and see what our world really is like. It ain’t complex political philosophies or -isms that create that crap out there in the streets, it’s the nature of people, period, end of sentence.

Now, what point are we really trying to make here?

clap clap way to go BluePony clap clap
Well said.
I have been close to the bottom of the barrel in life. Nothing as serious as that descrbed in the OP.
Truthfully I am 1 paycheck away from poverty now. I have worked hard to get where I am. With more hard work Things will get better still.
I have tried to make my little corner of the world a better place. I have only a limited amount of influance in others lives. I volunteer at the library helping people learn to read. Sure a second paying job would better pay the bills. The satisfaction I get is worth more than anything I could buy with an additional paycheck. I believe the goverment is doing the best that it can. I decided long ago that if I want the world a better place I have to get off my ass and lend a hand.

Osip

The thing is, this doesn’t even make Libertarian’s point – and I’ll go out on a limb and assume that he has one.

This is the entire problem with libertarianism – that people do, in fact, tend to ignore the problems of their neighbors. Not usually when they’re this bad, I’d hope, but thousands of kids quietly go to bed hungry at night and society does nothing. But under the bright, shiny philosophy of Libertarianism, suddenly we’ll all pitch right in and help our neighbors, despite all the evidence that, historically, we haven’t been very good at doing any such thing – as this very example shows. And under Lib’s own ethical philosophy, if this did occur, it would be the fault of the child’s parents for not taking good enough care of her or, worse, her own fault – because it’s personal responsibility uber alles. Even under libertarian principles, it has squat to do with the President and whomever he might be meeting with.

This is just another bitch-and-moan-fest by Lib about how shitty our existing social situation is, with the usual amount of constructive advice on how to make it better – i.e., none.

Interesting reactions — based, I suppose, on the assumption that I was making a political point.

I had written “On Poor Children” four years ago, after reading the account Qwisp recalled. I ran across it yesterday, and decided to share it here. (I was going to share either this, or a short story I had written about the same time.)

Yes, it mentions poverty, but it isn’t about poverty. It mentions government, but it isn’t about government. It mentions crime and chaos, but it isn’t about those either. Those things are, as BluePony pointed out, fairly mundane — he sees shit like that a lot. It isn’t even about God, Whom it also mentions. Nor is it about society. It really isn’t even about the little girl (who recovered, by the way, for those who might be interested but forgot to ask).

It’s about the person the little girl called out to, the one who was using her to buy a fix.

Oh.

Well, thanks for the free guilt trip anyway.

So, the government should subsidize crack sales, so mothers don’t have to sell their children?

Personally, I say get big government off of the pusher’s back. Privatize!

Wow Libby! Thanks for that little piece of sunshine! I think I’ll just go blow my brains out now!

Oh yeah, and have a nice day!

Lib, without an introduction or explanation from you, what else would you have expected from us? Isn’t the act of making a provocative post for the pure purpose of eliciting strong responses the classic definition of “trolling”?

I have no idea why you would do this, and in MPSIMS of all places. You write wonderfully well, Lib but there may be better ways to share with us. I urge you to use a bit more common sense in your presentation next time.

I’ll take to heart your advice, Xeno, and try to use better common sense than I evidently did here. I have seen others share their poetry, stories, and artwork here in MPSIMS, so I decided to put it here, never dreaming that, outside of Great Debates, any debate would ensue.

I don’t know whether it’s the fact that this was not a bright and sunny piece, but rather a macabre and gut-wrenching one, or whether people just expect political statements whenever I say, “Hello, world.”

I did not post with the intention of eliciting strong responses, except inasmuch as those responses were to be about the piece and not about me or my philosophies.

Maybe I should have gone with the short story, but it does, indeed, make a political point. My apologies to everyone for butting into MPSIMS.

Lib I didn’t actually suspect you of trolling, I just wanted to show you how it looked from the outside.

The dark nature and implicit political stance of the piece was definitely what got to me. Probably MPSIMS is the place to share one’s work, but a little note saying “Here’s a little of my work, what do you think?” and a “WARNING: Extreme downer!” would’ve let us approach your post in a “literature appreciation” mode. Without that, what you intended to be thought provoking was received with a bit of confusion.

I hope we can see more of your writing (with “intro’s” of course).

Thank you, Xeno, for those constructive and helpful suggestions. Consider me edified.

I remember when that happened. It was the same week Jon Benet Ramsey was murdered. An almost unimaginably brutal act that happened to a poor, black girl in the inner city got zero interest or attention (it sounds like many of you haven’t even heard of this or, if you did, have forgotten) while a brutal and horrible act that occurred to a little white upper class girl is being played around the media to this very day.