Please let me know what you think of this.....

This is a song I wrote, please let me know what you think of it. You can go to the folling web site to listen to it.
Thanks alot!

Sincerly,
Brent “Downhome” Lumkin

http://artists2.iuma.com/IUMA/Bands/Brent_Lumkin/

Fading Memory

I promised you,
I’d always love you,
As you were telling me goodbye,
I even swore,
On the stars above,
It was the end of my life.
Then as I watched,
You drive away,
I sat on the porch,
As my heart continued to break.

(Chorus) But that was a time ago,
Another life ago,
I’m lettin’ go of what used to be,
Yea I hurt for a while,
But now I’m learning to smile,
We’re becoming a fading memory.

I can’t recall,
The taste of your kiss,
My mind is slipping away,
The color of your eyes,
Is lost in time,
I never thought I’d forget these things,
They say that time,
Can play tricks on your mind,
I guess that’s true for me,
‘Cause I’m not the forgetful kind.

(Chorus)

(Bridge) I can’t help but wonder,
Where you are today,
If you think of me,
If you wish you’d stayed.

(Chorus)

I liked it. :slight_smile:

The sound quality wasn’t the best (I listened to it on Real Player), but it is a pretty good song. I like the lyrics, and I think you have a pretty decent voice.

Rose

I couldn’t listen to it (wood-burning computer here at home); reading the lyrics brought to mind a tune that may be miles away from yours. Good effort, keep it up.

I hope you realize you now share the copyright to the lyrics with the Chicago Reader.