Not all screenplays are good. I’ll grant you that having distinctive dialog is one of the hardest things to achieve in a screenplay, so don’t worry if you don’t have Joss Whedon caliber dialog just yet.
You can always rely on actors to make your script sound better, but that means that your script doesn’t sound good in the first place, and you’re relying on actors to make it sound better. Plus, have you ever worked with amateur actors? They can’t exactly read a line like Johnny Depp can, you know?
Do you mind listing some of them? I won’t tell anyone.
Can I ask those of you who have read it, which doesn’t seem like too many from what I can tell, to go onto the site and review it? I’m not asking for 4 or 5 stars, please just give it an honest review.