Prayer in Arizona

Okay, folks . . . here’s another suspected UL to debunk. I looked on snopes and couldn’t find it, so here goes:

http://boards.fool.com/Message.asp?mid=13814300

The link is to a poem with excerpts such as

“Now I sit me down in school
Where praying is against the rule
For this great nation under God
Finds mention of Him very odd.
If Scripture now the class recites,
It violates the Bill of Rights.
And anytime my head I bow
Becomes a Federal matter now.”

Sorry if I’m posting copyrighted material . . . I don’t think this is, though.

Anyone care to point me to a debunking?

iampunha, I’m not sure exactly what it is you’re asking for a “debunking” on. That an Arizona schoolkid wrote this poem? No idea whether that’s true. That school-mandated prayer is unconstitutional and has been so ruled by numerous courts? Perfectly true, can’t debunk it. That this has really had the effect of stifling constitutionally permitted prayer in schools? Now you’re talking.

From a 1998 ACLU press release:

“Praying is against the rule”? Nonsense. I can’t find any particular Arizona-related court case striking down an unconstitutional school prayer requirement that might have been the inspiration for this, but there are lots of such cases involving such laws in other states. Anyway, hope this helps.

I’m also a bit mystified as to what it is you’re looking to debunk…the authenticity of this poem?

Hard to say, but yeah, it could well be bogus.

It might be real:

Bagdad is an actual small town in the middle of BFN in my home state, and from personal experience, small-town Arizona in general tends to be as conservative and religious as anywhere I’ve been, except for maybe the rural deep South.

Also, the writing does seem pretty good for a teenager, but IMHO it’s not out of the range of possibility for a bright, bored, religious kid to come up with something like this. I mean, the vocabulary’s pretty fair, but with such a singsong AABB rhyme scheme, it ain’t exactly a complex work o’ literature.

But it seems more likely that it’s fake:

Typing in ‘school prayer bagdad arizona’ in google gets you dozens of carbon-copy postings of this, and almost every last one starts out “This was written by a teen in Bagadad, Arizona.” That’s it. The EXACT same line, but no name, no credit, no nothing.

There’s few exceptions, though: a few sites out there like this one, which claim it was “posted on the Bagdad Public Bulletin board 1/28/2000.” BUT they still don’t have a frickin’ NAME on them.

But I came up dead trying to search for this so-called bulletin board on the net, or even any other reference to it other than in the context of this poem. Then it hit me that maybe instead of some message base like this, they literally mean…a bulletin board, some piece of cork somewhere that someone first tacked this up to.

And if that’s the case, good luck trying to get any farther on tracking down the source.

For what it’s worth, when searching by date on Hotbot I couldn’t find a single site with this poem on it before October 1st of this year, so it does seem to be something that’s just making the rounds in the last few weeks…

But all in all, I bet it’s fakery, at least in the sense that it wasn’t written by some teenager stuck in nowhereland Arizona. For instance, check out http://www.freehomepages.com/crawdad/Children/children.html (scroll down to the bottom) which has TWO versions of this poem, one allegedly written by ‘an anonymous 12 year old from Boston’, and then after it has the Arizona version, which is almost word-for-word identical except for a few new stanzas.

My non-expert conclusion: bogus.

I don’t see anything to debunk.

It could have been written by a teenager, and there’s really no reason to believe that it wasn’t. Perhaps he/she posted it anonymously because they were afraid of getting in trouble with the school officials. There are plenty of asshole teachers and principles who would take this kind of message personally.

Snopes link:
http://www.snopes2.com/message/Forum15/HTML/000009.html

Doesn’t sound like it was written by a teen in Bagdad, Arizona. Why am I not surprised? After all, Christians have been misattributing authorship to books for nearly 2,000 years, so why change now?