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A young woman comes into the busy airport, and leads an older man to a quiet place near the windows to the great expanse of runways and taxiways below. She speaks with him, for a few moments, and goes to the counter to ask the attendant something. When she returns she tells the old man that they will have to wait about half an hour, or so, but the plane is on time, and no delay is expected. She sits down beside him, and gets out a book. The man sits quietly for a few moments.

As the first of many planes lands in front of the wide window, the old man comes to his feet, with some labor, and walks over to the window. He watches the plane land, and turns to the young woman.

“Daughter,” he says, “I think that’s the plane!”

She smiles, but makes no other answer. He turns, and watches the plane pass by. The next plane to taxi below must be the same one, he decides.

“Yep! Here it comes!” He calls out.

He watches the plane taxi by, off to a distant gate. His face displays only slight disappointment. He looks over to the gate his daughter has brought him to, which still shows an arrival time nearly half an hour away. This tiny drama plays out again, with each plane that lands. The cheerful and expectant announcement, the assumed identity of each passing plane and the mild but quickly dismissed concern over each disappointment.

Others wait here too, some awaiting travelers, some soon to be travelers themselves. They watch the old man with some bemusement. He seems much more lucid than his behavior would indicate. He does not seem confused, so much as he seems unfailingly willing to believe that each moment brings and end to his waiting. His endlessly rejuvenated optimism is not rational, but it is beyond any possible scorn, because it is so obviously genuine.

Twice, in half an hour, the plane of the moment comes to a gate near the one that his daughter sits near. Both times the man walks over, and watches the passengers exiting the gate, looking at each one, but for a moment. When the last one exits, he waits, and at length, returns to his seat, again to await the plane that must come, and must come soon.

At last, the plane that taxis up comes to the correct gate. His response is no more enthusiastic, nor any less, than it has been each time. The onlookers feel rather otherwise. A quiet expectation overcomes the common chatter of the traveler’s world. No one speaks at all. The moments stretch out, as the normal mechanics of air travel seem suddenly interminable to all that watch. Finally the passengers begin to come through the gate.

The old man and the silent audience look at each new passenger. They look at him each time. He simply looks on, to the next. Half a hundred people bustle by. A few are even somewhat disconcerted to notice that people are watching them intently. Most simply pass by, hurrying on to the destination of their journeys. In the end, the old man’s face is announcement enough for the watching crowd. He lights up with a bright smile, one which shows as much joy, and relief, and happiness as ever a man could feel.

“Mary! Mary, over here!” he shouts. She hears, and smiles, and waves. He walks to her. She walks to him. Perhaps they even hurry, though it would be difficult to tell. As they meet, they are the center of attention of a crowd, but to each other they are alone. They kiss, and hug, with a fierce and utterly tender desire to know, each of them that they are together.

She speaks loudly, “I am never leaving you again.” she says. He smiles, and walks with her to leave the airport. He seems now to be content, without anxiety. She is beaming. The young woman joins them, and the tiny drama concludes. Nearby, strangers find themselves swept up in the strength of this love, grown old, but ever stronger.

Tris

Geez…

Just what I needed tonight.

Emotions.

Thank you.

Hmmm Very nice. First story I’ve seen on SDMB .

Too bad there aren’t more.

Thanks

My apologies to all for whom this unexplained story appeared cryptic. It is a true story. At the time I wrote it, I was feeling very strong emotions about the people involved, who are my parents. This came about because my mother lay near death, and I was deeply worried about my father’s likely response to her passing. I reminisced with my sister about the enduring strength of their fifty-eight years of marriage, and she told me of this meeting at the airport.

Mom is now rather miraculously recovering from her stroke. Although much trial lies before her, she has remained here with him, as she promised. He is building ramps for her expected need of a wheelchair, and remodeling the house to make it accessible for her. (He’s eighty-four.) It is probably unreasonable to assume their immortality from this evidence, however, I find it works for me.

Thanks are tendered to my friends here who responded to me in email during my recent absence. I am much relieved, and very happy. I have still a great deal to do over the next few months, or years, but I find my burden light, knowing that this love goes on.

Tris

“I taught that boy everything he knows. . . and I am very sorry.”

Thank YOU for sharing… :slight_smile:

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful little story. The background that you gave on its origin makes it even more special. You packed a lot of love into those few paragraphs.

My best to you and your parents.

Dear Triska-

I just read the story you wrote about the love your parents share, and I have to thank you. It is a heartwarming story, and beautifully written. I am so glad your mom is recovering, and clearly she has a family who will help her to live a quality life filled with love in the time on earth she has before her.

I lost my mother three years ago, and my parents shared the same kind of love that your parents have. Their relationship is still a thing of wonder and beauty, because although my mother’s physical being is gone, their love has a life of it’s own–it lives on in my father. It lives in his eyes when he speaks of her, in the memories that he sometimes shares with us of their life together, and in the legacy of love that she gave us. My parents had 58 years of marriage, and when she died they still actually LIKED each other, as well as still being in love.

Now THAT is really something! Wish I could figure out the secret-my dad is not articulate enough to tell me what it is-if your folks ever tell you, please share it with us!

For those of you who enjoyed this, you may want to read a book by Nicholas Sparks called “The Notebook”. I cried all the way through it, but somehow when it was over I felt warm and good.

Again, thank you for sharing your touching tale.

Scotti

Whoa! dudess, that was a beautiful story. You really know how to write.

Tris, lovely story, beautifully written. I’ll just echo, thanks for sharing. Dang, you write good!

Tris, thank you so much for sharing that beautiful story. I knew on first reading that it was a true story, but didn’t realize it was your own parents to whom you were referring.

My parents also had a marriage and a love like that, but unfortunately they didn’t have the luxury of the kind of time your parents have had. 28 years is all they made it, as my mother succumbed to breast cancer at the age of 49.

My most heartfelt wishes for godspeed to your mother in her recovery. Thank you, again, for reminding me that true love really is out there to be had.

{{Hugs}}
Shayna

Shayna-

28 years of a love like that is more than almost anyone these days is able to manage to create.

Your parents, like mine, weren’t lucky. They worked at it, and Bless Them, they found a way to be happy together.

Again, wish I knew their secret!

PS-I am a newbie, is there a way to get people to read this beautiful story? I see that almost no one has viewed it, and I think it would be valuable for everyone.

Tris, I’m so glad things have turned around. I’m sure the spirit of the love surrounding her helped you and your family through this very difficult time.

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

Thank you, Scotticher. You’re right, I’m sure they worked on it very hard. In all the years of their marriage I never, ever heard either of them raise their voices to one another. They yelled at us kids from time to time - hehehe :wink:

As for their secret, I do know some of it, but would rather leave this thread to be about Tris’s parents. How about you start a thread asking people for their thoughts on what makes a marriage work and perhaps share an insight or two that you took from your parents’ marriage?

The best way I can think of to get more people to view this topic is to have it appear in Threadspotting on the front page. Just go nominate it in this topic or this topic on About This Message Board.

And welcome to Straight Dope! Hope to see you around more often. :slight_smile:

That was beautiful, Tris. Thank you.

Thank you all for the compliments on the story. Finding out that what you write has been read and enjoyed is the best reward for writing. I don’t really want the thread to be solely dedicated to that one tale, though. I had imagined that others might have poignant moments they could share, as well. If you are holding back to keep the topic clear, please, feel free to chip in your own.

Thanks again.

Tris