Sketch Comedy

I am currently writing (very slowly) a sketch comedy show. The whole show is a bit dark, and I use the bizzare idea that death and gratutious violence is funny. In contrast, the show is also imbued with very left-wing political commentary. I have a few (like, 10) sketches written, but I am running a bit low. I need help with any of the following:

What do I name the show, or at least, the pilot script?

Would it be good to have a few recurring characters?

What would be a good way to link entirely unrelated sketches together?

How do I keep the show’s dark tone without getting into Pythonesque silliness? (I’m having trouble with this)

And any ideas you would like to add.

Thanks

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Hmm, I was in a sketch comedy group a few years ago. We did very sick twisted sketches.
You could name the show either with something that refers to the show itself or something totally random and unrelated. Or name it after the group of people performing it (if you have one.)

Recurring characters are always good but you have to establish them first. See what your audience likes in the first show, then if some characters do well bring them back in the next show. Don’t have them re-occur in the first show or they’ll get tiring fast.

Unrelated sketches can be linked in all sorts of ways. You could just have a simple blackout and then the next sketch starts. If it’s a live-theater show as opposed to a tv show you could have someone do a monologue to fill time as you change your set. Or show a short film.

What’s wrong with Pythonesque silliness? I understand you want it to be dark, but it is comedy and therefore should still make people laugh. They did some dark humor too.

Good luck!

Have you seen the Upright Citizens Brigade? IMO they do a pretty good job of linking unrelated sketches, as well as other things. I think you should definitely check them out.

Okay, most important thing you must realize when doing sketch comedy is what’s known as The Two Minute Rule. What this means is, do NOT allow a skit to run more than two minutes long. Anything longer than that loses people’s interest, drags the joke on for way too long, and comes off reminding people of why they stoped watching Saturday Night Live. This is Most Important Rule Number One, so don’t forget it!

Naming the show is completely up to you and whoever you’re working with. I know we’ve got some pretty witty people on the boards, but don’t trust them to name something we really know nothing about.
As for transitions, The Ben Stiller Show did a great little bit where at the end of each sketch, someone would do an action, and at the beginning of the next, a character would do a response to it in some way. For example, at the end of one sketch, the phone would ring and one character would reach for it, and the next scene would start off with a close up of the phone, someone picking it up, and BAM! You’re in the next sketch. Or someone throws something off screen, and you see it land in front of a passer by who happens to be the lead in the next sketch. If you can pull shit like that off well, it looks really good.

I was in a sketch comedy show here in Austin called The Campus Loop that ran for a solid three years (and was the only nationally distributed student produced program in the US I might add…until our founders went bankrupt, but anyway). We used a linking storyline, which worked really well for us as a way to connect the skits. Create some characters, and create a small little five to ten minute sit-com of sorts for them to be involved in. Then, break that into four or five segments and when each one ends, go to a few skits, then go to commercial. Use this as a means of coming back from commercial break, kicking off the episode, and ending it. It works really well, trust me.

Again, re-ocurring characters are good, assuming they’re good characters. And don’t put them in every show (unless you’re using them as a link), and when they get tired, don’t be afraid to kill them off. That could even help with the dark feel of the show.

As for how to keep the show dark and cryptic without it becoming hokey…well, that’s going to depend on the quality of your work. Remember that in sketch comedy, death is funny! If someone dies a horrible death in the midst of four people, it’s funny if only one reacts negatively to it than all of them. Dumb down the horror of what’s happened, even if it’s something insanely horrible, like running over a fluffy bunny wabbit with a lawnmower. That can be either insanely disgusting and disturbing, or really fucking funny. Just depends on how you treat it.

Good luck.

LOL, fluffy bunny wabbit. If any Brits are reading this, this show is like the Fast Show meets the League Of Gentlemen- only with fewer repeating characters. My sketches are each between 30 sec and like 2 minutes, as I have a penchant for speed.

One thing I really like is the League of Gentlemen, which make no effort of de-horrorizing death. I want to be able to do that, but I think that’ll make it too esoteric.

One thing about this show is that a lot of it is real life experiences I’ve had- exaggerated to a wicked extreme. I think that’ll add to the popularity, making it something the people can sort of relate to, but is still wacky enough to be funny.

As for the title, I’ve narrowed it down to:

  1. Twenty-Nine Minutes in the mind of John Stamos
  2. Communist Techno Dance Party

What do you think?

Thanks

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