Don’t ya wanna guess my name? 
One Question:
[Michael Wallace voice]
Isn’t it true that you are, in fact, Brittney Spears’s real father?
[/Michael Wallace voice]
I like it, though. Interesting perspective, great ending. I like how it’s only the devil talking, never the doc.
Sometimes, dear, you scare me.
But you already knew that.
Wonderful story, I enjoyed it a lot.
You are frightfully creative, Jester-bear…
Bravo! Very nice. As much as I enjoyed reading your story, you may want to be careful posting it. I remember reading a thread here awhile ago that stated that some publishers view work posted on the internet to be already published. If you are trying to get published that may work against you. Also you could be plagiarized. If you want me too, I’ll try to find a link to that thread as I may be garbling that information.
Published? Nah. It’d be nice, but currently I’m more concerned with graduating from High School than with getting anything published.
Thank you for the info, though, it’s much appreciated.