I’m not the big Heinlein freak in the family–that title belongs to my lady fair, who has a considerable collection of his stuff that she doesn’t read any more. (The reason she gave me is that I found her continuing fascination with him inexplicable, and I regret contributing to her eventual abandonment of the pleasure of reading him.)
So what to say about my opinion as a sideline observer who got sucked in?
1.) Oh my God, could he have been good. The guy had the chops to write incredible stuff–as a stylist, he could’ve been both impressive and accessible, and that’s rare. I think he pissed away a lot of his talent, but he needed the money and the genre wasn’t exactly conducive to lyric poetry.
2.) If I read another Heinlein scene where some dude’s been asked a deeply thoughtful Socratic-type question designed to elicit some highly-directed rumination on the structure of society and the individual’s role in it, and the dude’s first response is, “Eh?”, I am going to set fire to the book. Even if it’s your highly-collectible autographed blood-drive premium slipcovered “Job”. Please permit me to apologize in advance.
3.) Having pointed out that he could be a stylistic nightmare (and it’s fairly common for any fan of any author to be confronted with examples of less-than-stellar work by a gleeful opponent who says, “What about this?”), I will say this. At one point when I was coaching a new writer through a difficult scene that depended on revealing information without being obvious about it, the best possible example, in all our extensive library, of how to do it right came from “Time for the Stars”.
4.) When I tried to read “Glory Road”, I got as far as page three, wherein it is revealed that the hero always knows what direction north is. I threw the book across the room, exclaiming in disgust, “I will be God-damned if I will read another piece of manipulative crap by this man. I am damned sure not gonna get to page 186 only to find out that his unerring ability to determine true north saves the life of his entire party. He always does this–if his characters believe in all that military-preparedness garbage, he gives them everything they need to prevail against the heathens. He stacks the deck to make sure the people who agree with him come out on top.” It was years before she told me that the trick was that the hero had been pre-engineered with a number of abilities, including an internal compass, because he was supposed to be a value-added bodyguard. So much for my rant.
5.) In a sci-fi world in which we had female characters who were always somebody’s wife or somebody’s daughter and were always screaming, turning their ankles while fleeing, and getting rescued by the guys, Heinlein offered us an unprecedented image: a professional female soldier who, while man-hungry in the best cliche old-maid fashion, nonetheless gave her little brother advice about what kind of knife to use for self-defense because she, like, knew. In a society in which even the most fanciful flights of speculation failed to anticipate what was going to happen to women after 1950, only Heinlein, among the top pulp-to-lit-era sci-fi authors, managed more often than not to make his female characters fully-realized independent actors in a true meritocracy. In the early days of the feminist sci-fi movement, he was the only one of the old guard who took his female characters seriously enough to make them real, and the critics to whom that mattered have always been both impressed and grateful. For every Joann Eunice (and by God that book’s a total embarrassment to speculative fiction), there’s a Lummox, a Carmencita, a Cynthia Randall, a Friday. You think, in his later years, he was interested in developing Lazarus Long? Uh-uh. The one he was really in love with, and struggled desperately (and unsuccessfully) to get right before they planted him, was Maureen Johnson.
One of the things about literary criticism and all that we might wish to point out to the younglings is that it was common up until, say, 1980 to hammer home a point no matter whether it fit. The trio of Heinlein heroes? Panshin, as befitted an era in which Lawrence Peter said everything in human society responded to the Peter Principle, was going to force those characters into that mold without any exceptions whatsoever. You can’t fault the guy for overdeveloping an idee fixe; every critic did that then. We’d be a lot more nuanced about such a critical opinion now (thank you, Tom Wolfe).
I think Panshin’s got something going when he says competence is the defining characteristic of a Heinlein hero; my beef was always that Heinlein, instead of allowing for a bit of random variation, always always ALWAYS set up his fictional societies so only the competent (in his definition) would win. Hemingway (not a bad comparison at all) also has a strict, complex behavioral code for his characters: the difference is, they don’t often win. For a Hemingway dude, getting through a tough situation without abandoning the behavioral code is the victory. I don’t think Heinlein was ever willing to be brutal to his characters on a permanent basis; not every writer can.
OK, I’m done now.