I am truly sorry I made the joke about “All are equal in peaceful quest.” making a good slogan because it has rhythm. (Try it; it really does make a good chant.) This board is sorely lacking not only in its understanding, but also in its sense of humor. Maybe if I add more smileys to my posts…
The OP is a distillation, a translation of the DoI. I called it the pledge to liberty (PtL). If you dislike pledges as much as you dislike slogans, you may call it the principles of liberty (PoL).
You are on the right track. However, the dealer does not get people hooked on The Demon Weed anymore than the bartender gets people hooked on Demon Alcohol. We can either also lock up all bartenders for life; or simply add exceptions to “all”. “…with liberty and justice for all…except non-alcohol drug dealers.”
But then all is no longer “all”, is it? “…with liberty and justice for most!” No, the answer is to regulate peaceful quest that is dangerous for some. Prohibition of peaceful pursuit of happiness only makes peaceful quest dangerous for all.
By definition, we the people that hold these truths self evident do not need an argument to understand the spirit of liberty. I am sorry to hear that you do.
The constitution gives congress the right to regulate commerce; it does not give legislature or the executive the right to prohibit the peaceful pursuit of happiness. Prohibition of peaceful pursuit of happiness is unconstitutional. This has somehow escaped our esteemed justices. They indeed have the authority to strike down these unconstitutional and counterproductive laws. I have suggested that a translation of the principles of liberty should be placed not only in front of our justices, but also in front of our legislatures so they might also take the hint.
It worked for our libertarian cranky founders in 1776. It worked for our libertarian cranky abolitionists in the 1860’s. It worked for our libertarian cranky civil right activists in the 1960’s. I am not a “Libertarian”, but I do honor these particular libertarian cranks.
Franklin and Jefferson very eloquently made the argument for liberty. The PoL is my attempt to show how to put it into practice.
All are equal in peaceful quest.
If a black person wishes to ride in the front of the bus, she has the same right as a white person, no matter the law.
All are innocent until proven guilty of * threat to peaceful quest*.
This is different than proven guilty of breaking the law; as above, it may be that it is the law that unjustly prohibits peaceful pursuit of happiness.
It is the duty of government to secure these rights through regulation and justice.
Please tell me I do not need to explain this also.
Freedom is not accomplished by words; it is accomplished by putting our ideals into practice. I cannot make you understand that following these guidelines is a reasonably good way to do that.
Some people will understand and agree with what Jefferson and Franklin and their “libertarian” successors were trying to accomplish; some will not. Some will take upon themselves to help in this quest. Some will not. Some will attempt to belittle or sidetrack this quest. Words are cheap and some are lies, but the spirit behind the words is eventually revealed.
I appreciate your constructive suggestions and comments. Innocent and guilty are legal findings and are not necessarily dependent on what actually occurred. While technically more accurate, your modifications are not completely necessary and add too many words for my goal.
Peace
r~