To borrow from another thread…Yeah - I’m hearing that whoosh (no - not of non-comprehension) of that oversized mallet-head, swinging ominously through the air, soon to land on something.
And that something would be Bob Welch’s saccharine-beyond-reason “Sentimental Lady”, featuring this perfectly normal rhyme:
Fourteen joys and a will to be merry And all of the things that we say are very
Extra pukey is that the following lyrics are not, at all, any sort of logical continuation from “very”, even.
I don’t think Gordon Lightfoot was trying to rhyme “go” and “most”; “As the big freighters go, it was bigger than most” was one line in the second verse. Some lines of The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald did have internal rhyme: “The ship was the pride of the American side”, “Old Michigan steams, like a young man’s dreams”. But not all of them.
Anyway, I’m willing to give Gordon some slack, for the sake of the beautiful rhyme in the fifth verse, that punches home the tragedy:
“They might have split up, or they might have capsized
They may have drove deep and took water.
And all that remains, are the faces and the names
Of the wives, and the sons, and the daughters.”
Oh, come now! It’s Arlo Guthrie. He’s being funny.
This is pretty much totally off topic, but if you enjoy the music of Gordon Lightfoot, @Slow_Moving_Vehicle watch this. Carson McKee has a great voice and it’s a nice cover but wait till the end. He plays it through twice, and the second time… well it was literal LoL for me.
Actually I’ve barely heard Lightfoot doing Early Morning Rain myself, but his vocal style is so distinctive it translates regardless of which particular song.
Carson McKee is half of The Other Favorites, the other half being a guitar prodigy by the name of Josh Turner. Basically all their stuff is great.
Ha, I think I remember that story-- when Dylan and the Beatles first met, he sparked one up, hit it and passed it to one of the Beatles, who were all “what’s this then? Eh, what? Is that one of those ‘Jazz cigarattes’?”
Dylan, surprised, said he thought they already smoked the herb, because he mistook that line as “I get high”.
Sorry to drag this back in, ha ha, but I hadn’t checked back into this thread. Anyway, yeah that was my take (before being corrected). It makes sense - dog without a bone, actor without an audience.
No worries my good man. It’s all good. I probably snarked back a bit myself.
Appreciate your posting about the handwritten lyrics. I was able to google and find copy online.