I give it a B. Note that’s a relatively high mark for this stubbornly mediocre show.
The twist at the end didn’t fool me:
[spoiler]I was on to it the moment T’Pol appeared. “Didn’t we just hear Phlox tell the good Cap’n he was the last one awake?” I asked my wife. “And why is Phlox learning how to maintain the engines if T’Pol is still around? Oh, look, she didn’t take any soup. SHE’S A GHOST!” Heh.
“It’s healthy for Denobulans to hallucinate” was the giveaway. That happened at about the 20 minute mark, as I recall. After that, there wasn’t anything else going on.
And I question the wisdom of firing up the warp engines and everything even though he knew he was hallucinating at least the Xindi and Zombi Sato and couldn’t trust his reading of the sensors telling him where they were in the cloud, or even a look out the window. For all he knew, they were out of the cloud an hour beforehand and his brain was fried. If they’d wanted to really turn the screws, they could have had him draw that conclusion, saying he didn’t trust his reading of the sensor, and waking up a crew member as a trial, only to see him or her grabbing his head and hitting the deck. Naturally, at the end that crew member would be in sickbay, with a line about “it’ll be a couple of days, but I think they’ll be fine” so Phlox knows he didn’t kill anybody, but it would really have sent his paranoia up to a new level at the time.[/spoiler]
Anyway, the rest the episode obviously wasn’t as successful with the inevitable twist so clearly telegraphed within the first fifteen minutes.
“I’m a physician, not an engineer” cracked us up, though.
And Phlox is far and away the show’s most interesting character (and Billingsley the best actor), so an opportunity to get to know him, even if the episode itself melts like a square of toilet tissue in a bowl of water (and even disregarding how the premise is borrowed from Voyager), is welcome.
Further, Roxann Dawson shows some real directorial chops in the way the episode is shot and edited. The pacing is really nice, and keeps the show from grinding to a halt even though basically nothing is happening. It’s a nice, light touch, pushing only where necessary. Good job with a throwaway script.
So, I give it a B.