Finish the "Star Trek" story: Discussion/control thread

so, where are all the authors?

What happens if someone else takes one of my characters in a completely wrong direction?
First of all Lt Comm Jeremie Collins is female, about 28 years old, cheif security officer, and would never, ever, question her commanding officer’s decision. I picture her an Irish Tasha, younger, and with a better sense of fun, but with all the skills her station requires. I like to think she could take Tasha in a fight

She obviously has instructions about whatever is in the airlock that go against her Captain.

…and I just notice the gender problem. ^ :dubious: ^

Sorry, I am out. I only know the original Federation. When Men were real Men and Woman were real Woman* and Greenish Half Vulcans were Real Greenish Half Vulcans.

Seriously, I will read, but I have nothing to contribute.

Jim

  • (and wore short skirts)

Well, think of it as the whiskey not being alcohol, guys wearing skirts and French guys speaking with an English accent.

Never mind, it is a difficult concept.

Elendil, plese send me email.

^ :dubious: ^

I’ve emailed carnivorousplant. And What Exit?, if you want to run a draft of your writing submissions by me via email, feel free. Don’t hold yourself back from taking part just because your Trekitude may be slightly dated - I think the story (at least so far) doesn’t depend upon encylopedic knowledge of the ST:TNG era.

I’m sure you could still contribute something by perusing TNG Wiki articles. That’s what I did.

I’m surprised, after all the interest, there are only 4 or 5 of us writing stuff for the story, and I don’t like going twice because part of the fun is seeing what someone else has in mind (as long as it doesn’t violate the character)

**Elendil ** - have you added anything? I don’t recall

After getting it started, I wanted to wait a bit before posting again. Have at it, everyone!

Extra points for knowing what “Sheket ba’vak Asha” means.

Please. I spent 3 summers at UAHC camp! :slight_smile:

So tell us, already! :dubious:

“Please be quiet” or more colloquially, “Shut up already”

Mrs. Plant told me it means, “Sit down and shut up”. :slight_smile:
YTMV
Your translation may vary.

Do Nebula-class ships have the equivalent of a 10-Forward? That’s the sort of duty station I have in mind for Ellington’s man.

Memory alpha says: The Nebula-class starship was an Explorer-type vessel in service in Starfleet in the second half of the 24th century. Its design is closely related to that of the Galaxy-class

I would make a WAG of yes.

What does it mean, “HRH”? :slight_smile:

Are Gul Sheket and his faithfull sidekick Lt. Cmdr. Collins trully busted?
Is Archy-what’s his name a bad guy or not?
Must Carnivorousplant return to writing the Engineer, John Fisher?
What does “HRH” really mean?
Tune in next time!

The primary hull of a Nebula-class starship is very similar to that of a Galaxy-class ship such as the Enterprise-D. So I’d say, sure, go ahead and create a Ten Forward.

Anyrose and I will give you a report on the brig. :rolleyes: