Hi. I have a sentence that I think is badly written. I don’t know enough technical grammar stuff to say so w/ all the rules & stuff. I would appreciate a technical response as to what is wrong with the following:
It seems pretty clear that the sentence is saying that the solution can be solved rather than saying that the problems can be solved. But I don’t know how to state it technically.
Technically, in your sentence the verb “solved” is modifying the noun “solution.” By definition, solutions don’t need to be solved. I think that’s why your bad grammer detector is ringing.
(to most land use problems) is a prepositional phrase. (Right?) The noun in the sentence is The solution, which “good design” is modifying, when you need it to modify “land use problems.”
But is good design truly crucial to land use problems? Wouldn’t it depend on the usage planned and the topography of the land?
(sorry, got intrigued by content).
The use of 2 variants of solution is redundant–the solution cannot solve. It can be realized; it can be , it can be aided by good design etc. Now, land use problems can be solved, answered, deciphered, elucidated, figured out, decoded, settled, determined, untangled and worked out–to name a few synonyms from my trusty thesaurus here.
Solutions cannot be solved. Verb cannot modify the noun variant of itself.