My apologies for calling y’all “DeVry dropouts”. I will not take back my comments about the quality of your short film (sorry, it’s just not good) but reading your website and your post here has impressed me. You can write, I’m not sure you can make that translate into films, but please try to prove me wrong. Please.
But back to you’re writing style, and how you express yourself. You have talent and intelligence, I hope you will post more here.