Hi all-
I’m planning to break up a poem into several different pieces and I was wondering if punctuation was important. I was thinking about a triptych or perhaps even something less structured, maybe a couplet on each piece. Maybe even less structured than that…I might go completely free form, I don’t know. (The reason I call them pieces is I plan on doing this in pen & ink.) Anyways…I’m planning on using the lyrics to a song by Van Morrison and I found the lyrics online , but there isn’t any punctuation whatsoever included.
How important is punctuation in the manner in which I plan to use the language? I have no idea, at the moment, where I plan to break the lyrics right now. I might put one line by itself, then 3 lines…hell, i might put a single word on a piece of paper by itself and follow that up with the rest of the line on another piece of paper… I just don’t know right now.
How should this, as is, be punctuated?
Whenever God shines his light on me
Opens up my eyes so I can see
When I look up in the darkest night
I know everything's going to be alright
In deep confusion, in great despair
When I reach out for him he is there
When I am lonely as I can be
I know that God shines his light on me
Reach out for him, he'll be there
With him your troubles you can share
If you live the life you love
You get the blessing from above
He heals the sick and heals the lame
Says you can do it too in Jesus name
He'll lift you up and turn you around
And put your feet back on higher ground
Reach out for him, he'll be there
With him your troubles you can share
You can use his higher power
In every day and any hour
He heals the sick and heals the lame
Says you can do it too in Jesus name
He'll lift you up and turn you around
And put your feet back on higher ground.
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