It’s hard to respond because of your Fundamentalist views. Only about 25% of Christians think that way, though they’re a very, very loud group. Many of the things you are stressing as being extremely important are considered almost irrelevant in other denominations.
The quoted text above demonstrates that you are trying to rely on a magic formula to get you right with God so you can save yourself from Hell. Assuming God is smart, and most churches agree that he probably is, he will see right through that charade. Words mean almost nothing, it all comes down to works and action.
Fundamentalist churches tell you that you can get right with God by denying yourself of the world around you. Don’t drink, don’t smoke, don’t have premarital sex, don’t have homosexual sex, don’t gamble, don’t cuss, don’t …
More moderate churches tell you that the way to get right with God is by service. Charity, honesty, trustworthiness. They teach that you are to be a good steward and an example to the community around you.
At its root, Faith is a relationship with God. Strong relationships are built by the actions each member puts into it. Couples should spend quality time with one another, they should give each other occasional gifts, they should serve each others needs and equally share the burden of chores. There has to be mutual affection. Without these constant acts and effort to keep a relationship strong it will whither and die. The same is true with God. If all you have are words then there’s really nothing there to build on.
Faith and works are one and the same thing. You do works to build faith, and with faith you do more works.
God, and the community around you, will be far better served by you picking up a hammer and working on a habitat for humanity house; working at a food bank; joining any number of groups that teach important skills to anybody who needs them. The worst way to serve is by trying to tell other people the myriad ways they’re sinning and driving them away from the church forever.