So, I am now a published author...

Kaio: Well, what’s the worst that can happen, eh?

(Aiee!)

Just bought it, and will try to bubble it up closer to the top of my reading stack!

Cool, thank you! I hope you like it, in that dreadful uneasy way. :smiley:

I read it and can recommend it to anyone in need of a good mind-fuck.

Uh-oh: now I’m worried again… I don’t like mind-fucks…

I’ll read it in broad daylight, with other people in the house, with the windows open, and Vivaldi in the background. Can’t get scared with Vivaldi going, right? And a cat on my chest. No, better, a doggie!

I have confidence in you Trinopus! You can do it!

And really, there’s nothing better than a book, a blanket, and a cat, so by all means. The doggie can lie on your feet and growl at the monsters in the dark shadowy corners of the room. :smiley:

It’s not that kind of scary, Trinopus. Not rar boo scary. More of an “eternal bleakness of the clouded mind” sort of darkness.

Read it! It’s a short novel, and I can see the “mind-fuck” aspects. It’s “classical horror” in that it uses certain classically familiar motifs. It’s a kind of “horror of manners,” in that it is mostly about the characters’ interacting.

If I were to find any fault in it, it is that the antagonist didn’t really do a very good job of it. I don’t want to give anything away, but the bad guy seems to have missed several tricks. For a “smart villain” kind of guy, his approach seems to have been kinda dumb.

(If he’d been totally honest and explained everything right from the get-go, things might have worked out differently! But villains never seem to do this!)

The writing style was excellent: good, strong, clear narrative and comfortable, believable dialogue. Since those are the hardest things to do in a story, you, as a writer, are on secure ground for the rest of your professional career! And I’ll go and say something nice on Amazon, too!

Congratulations! Always great to see a local lad make good!

Congrats! Next up on my kindle.

Trinopus: Yay! I’m so glad you liked it. And thank you kindly for the reviews here and on Amazon.

kayaker: Enjoy!

The layout for the paperback is in progress, so we Luddites can read it too.

I should have a proof by next week. Yay!