You can lay your head back on the ground
And let your hair fall all around me
[…]
Just lay your head back on the ground
And let your hair spill all around me
[…]
Just lay your head back on the ground
And let your hair fall all around me
There’s other slight changes in the refrain as well but the head/hair thing always felt somewhat arbitrary to me.
She’s been crying I’ve been thinking And I am the Rain King
She’s been lying I’ve been sinking And I am the Rain King
She’s been dying I been drinking and I am the Rain King
Mean Mr. Mustard , you forgot the Beatles ‘Ob-la-di, ob-la-da’? for shame
Happy ever after in the market place…
Desmond lets the children lend a hand…
Molly stays at home and does her pretty face…
…
Happy ever after in the market place…
Molly lets the children lend a hand…
Desmond stays at home and does his pretty face…
My vote for minimalist chorus change that meets the OP’s criteria…
Faith No More’s “We Care A Lot” “It’s a dirty job but someones gotta do it”
till the very last rep in the song… “It’s a dirty song but someone’s gotta sing it”
“And she’ll have fun, fun, fun til her daddy takes the t-bird away,” in the end becomes
“And we’ll have fun, fun, fun now that daddy took the t-bird away.”
That always struck me as a little creepy, honestly.
How about the Who’s “We’re Not Gonna Take It”? The chorus responds to Tommy twice:
“We’re not gonna take it
Never did and never will
We’re not gonna take it
Gonna break it
Gonna shake it
Let’s forget it, better still”
“We’re not gonna take it
Never did and never will
Don’t want no religion
And as far as we can tell
We ain’t gonna take you
Never did and never will
We’re not gonna take you
We forsake you
Gonna rape you
Let’s forget you, better still”
And you want to travel with her
And you want to travel blind
And you know that she will trust you
For you’ve touched her perfect body with your mind.
…
And you want to travel with him
And you want to travel blind
And you think maybe you’ll trust him
For he’s touched your perfect body with his mind.
…
And you want to travel with her
And you want to travel blind
And you know that you can trust her
For she’s touched your perfect body with her mind.