The thing about the Etsy community is that it attracts a lot of crafting pros who do this full-time. They take their work seriously, and they put a lot of effort into making a slick page that looks very polished and professional. If you’re going to compete with those guys, you need to make sure you’re on the same footing.
That said, I think you’ve got some pretty nice stuff, so I don’t think it’s necessarily your crafts that are the problem so much as it is the approach… here’s what I think you could improve:
Photos
They’re not terrible photos (in that they don’t look like they’ve been taken with a cell phone cam, they’re in focus and are relatively well framed), but they’re not really showing your wares in the most flattering light.
I can tell you’re using flash on some of these photos… that’s a big no-no. Shoot with natural light, or build a DIY lightbox on the cheap.
If your camera can’t do macro shots, you should also look into buying one that can (many mid-range point-and-shoots can do this). Macro means you can include some extra close-up shots to show details in beading, texture, etc on top of the main product shot.
Presentation
I think these necklaces are lovely but they way they’re displayed is really not appealing. As a rule, jewellery should be hung whenever possible instead of laid flat.
Try playing with displays - hanging necklaces and earrings from branches, for example, would be quite appropriate for the Native vibe you’ve got going (like this, for example).
Crop. There’s way too much background around some of your pieces, especially the smudge sticks.
Speaking of backgrounds - skip the dark, busy or otherwise distracting ones. Keep it simple, light and fresh… plain white or off-white is best.
Try playing with the angles or positioning of products, rather than shooting them straight from above. You want it to look interesting, so that customers will take a closer look instead of browsing on to the next thing.
Pricing
The shipping fees seem a little much to me for some of your items. The $5 shipping for a $7 necklace nearly doubles the total cost… that’s pretty hefty for something that can be easily placed in a padded envelope and shipped for a couple bucks.
Be consistent. Shipping is free on a $16 pair of moccasins, which means that at the end of the day, the customer is paying pretty much the same cost for the moccasins ($16), the necklaces ($12), or a bracelet ($15)… seems a little off to me.
Consider combining shipping for multiple item purchases. It encourages people to buy multiples, which is win-win for everyone.
All that said, I’m not a pro by any means… I’ve toyed with the idea of getting into Etsy for quite some time and have done a LOT of research, and I’ve been doing food photography for several years as a devoted amateur. These are just my non-expert opinions. 