I really liked The Gathering Storm, but this one kinda left me feeling disappointed. I cannot disagree more with statements to the effect of “Sanderson sounds just like Jordan.” In my opinion, Jordan didn’t write poetry, but there was a sophistication to his descriptions that Sanderson can’t do (or, to be charitable, can’t do while on a tight schedule). Obviously RJ went overboard describing clothing and such, but I think I’d rather take a paragraph that I could skim over about brocade and studded pearls and such over the half-sentence Sanderson would give in a similar situation.
(Challenge to those who are mid-read, or to myself when I re-read it – find the longest description of any single thing. I bet it’ll be ~2 sentences, and the adjectives will probably be along the lines of “large” or “tall.”)
Sanderson did do a better job with Mat in this book, but in my opinion he really screwed up two people:
Lan and Rand. Lan protested way, WAY too much – he sounded like a whiny bitch, whereas RJ would have conveyed a similar statement much more effectively with a grunt or some kinda cheesy [but honestly kinda badass too] Malkieri phrase. And Rand sounds like some sort of New-Age hippie, spouting wise-sounding nonsense. He’s, like, the Dragon Reborn, maaaaaan
The middle-to-later part of the book was superb, with the
Perrin/Slayer fight overlaid with the Aes Sedai/Mesaana/Black Ajah fight overlaid with the Gawyn/Bloodknives fight, all frenetically contained by the Dreamspike
but the “big reveal” in there was weak (and even weaker so was the perfunctory ending of that particular baddie).
Also – and this is a major spoiler, really:
Graendal killing Asmodean was revealed in the glossary? I’ve never really given two shits about it, but that was kind of a dick way to treat the hundreds of thousands of fans who were really invested in that particular mystery.
All told, I think a split into two volumes would have worked better than this split into three. But I’m still eagerly awaiting the next one (the last one :eek:).
P.S. Aviendha’s storyline, while short, was pretty damned awesome. It… I dunno if “scared” me is the right word, but I definitely said something like, “Oh wow, holy shit.”
P.P.S. The events portrayed on the cover were way, way rushed. If it was going to get a 20 page-ish treatment, this shit should have happened around book 9 or so, rather than this interminable wait.