Here’s what I posted in the very-hardcore-fandom dresdenfiles subreddit:
I’ve read the whole series twice, so I like them a lot, but I’m in no way a hardcore theorycrafter like many of you. Here are my reactions, thoughts and questions:
(1) Overall, I loved it. The big fight (which obviously was most of the book) absolutely lived up to all the buildup last book. One thing done particularly well was giving Harry relevant and important things to do (up to and including the final binding) without suddenly powering him up past Mab, One-eye, etc.
(2) Murphy dying was super sad, but also necessary for there to be stakes. Main characters can’t always have plot armor. And sometimes people just die in stupid ways.
(3) I liked how Butters’s sword worked, but it seemed to be different from how it was described last book. If it’s harmless to humans, then why would it hurt (but not amputate) Harry when he was in a homicidal rage? Homicidal rages are, sadly, entirely human. It did seem to be more like “harms the evil, aids the good” regardless of species, although I don’t remember if we specifically saw it being used against one of the human mercenaries
(4) I love the twist with Lara, can’t wait to see how that plays out
(5) Do we know if Harry told anyone/everyone about Marcone? He learned two massive revelations in quick succession (Marcone and Justine) and we didn’t on-screen see him tell anyone about either one, which makes me nervous, although everyone seemed to know about Justine at the end.
One question for the more hard core of you: I thought something had happened that totally changed Bob. Wasn’t he involved in some re-homing where he ended up in a different skull with a totally different personality, something involving Lasciel? Or am I conflating things?
And some (generally minor) criticisms/complaints:
(1) After the big deal made last book about “this will never be kept a secret, it’s too big, everything will change” I was pretty disappointed at yet another “government covers it up with some insane story about terrorism”. I was really hoping that the next few books would deal with the fallout of the magical world totally and openly interacting with the mortal world… but it seems like any such will be limited to just Chicago.
(2) Probably my biggest gripe: so it turns out that the US government, in the form of the Library of Congress (wtf?) has known about the supernatural all along, and somehow no one has ever mentioned this to Harry in all of the insane stuff that has happened to him and everything he has been involved with? What were these librarians doing up until now if not investigating Harry?
(3) As I mentioned in another thread, it’s one thing for the White Council to say “having one of our members who is a sworn vassal of Mab is unacceptable, we can’t have fighting allegiances like that”. Its another to kick Harry out immediately after he won a massive victory, powered up immensely, might have the eye, is grieving his dead lover; and do so in a particularly harsh and antagonistic fashion. They easily could have said “hey, we can’t let you be on the white council, but we will continue to support you informally, you still have friends here, yada yada yada”. Even if they were lying they could have said that. (Granted maybe whoever is making those decisions is malicious/possessed).
(4) I found the fight with the black court a bit jarring, mainly because it felt like it needed an extra moment when the stakes were acknowledged. Like, they realize that it’s black court vampires, and Harry suddenly thinks “we’re all going to die”. As it was, I vaguely thought Harry was a match for a black court vampire, and him and four trained wardens, who should be getting the drop on them, plus river shoulders, plus a senior council member… and it felt like the rhythm of the fight was “ok, game on, wardens are doing a good job, clearly about on the same level… then Drakul is a serious badass… oh wait, all the wardens are dead?”.
(5) Did anything come of the whole “reality is falling about and weird things will happen” thing?
(6) Where was Ferrovax the whole time?
(7) Finally, I’m a little puzzled by what Justine/Nemesis’s plan was from the beginning. So Nemesis has occupied Justine, and wants to get to Demonreach. (Side note: once Harry realizes that she is possessed, on the boat, shouldn’t he not say anything and go with her to Demonreach, on which he has absolutely insane power and control and intellectus, and then just imprison her and sort it out later?) So it (Nemesis) in some way convinces Thomas to attack the svartelves? But how? Revealing itself to Thomas? If so, why wouldn’t Thomas immediately and verbosely tell Harry everything? If Nemesis’s entire plan only worked if Thomas (a) survived the attack but (b) was badly enough hurt not to be able to communicate in full words and © was precisely so badly wounded that the only way to heal him was to put him on demonreach, then that’s a pretty sketchy plan. Plus of course there’s a fair chance that Harry will then die in the Ethniu invasion, in which case, sorry, no demonreach.