I think there is a lot of misidentified locations here – Fargo for Duluth, Duluth for Bemidji, Bemidji for Fargo, etc…but I don’t think it really interferes with enjoying the flow.
I wonder if the FBI even has an office of any significance in Fargo. I doubt there is any sort of criminal enterprise in Fargo or the whole of the Dakotas that would justify a criminal office building with at least 22 employees. Just sayin’.
to me, one weak point for the whole story is Malvo’s desire to punish Lester for fleeing from the elevator shootings. Maybe it was just that Lester seemed ready to complete his contract for selling his soul and then backed out? Punish the apostate?
Lester certainly did sell his soul. No one goes from being a wimpy unsuccessful insurance salesman in one year to the ‘salesman of the year’ nationally, with his own modern office, a new wife, women wetting their panties when they see him, a new house, etc. without the help of some devilish force. Not after killing your wife, framing your brother for murder, etc. etc.
Lester was becoming, though, not Malvo’s acolyte, but a force equal to Malvo. He outsmarted Malvo at the end, caused his death in a way…and got away with it for a time before the cops caught up to him. I don’t think Malvo completely understood that, but I think his motive in trying to kill Lester was as much to eliminate competition as to protect himself. He knew that Lester was in as much danger from him as he was from Lester, so far as flipping to the cops.
In the last episode, Malvo is no longer causing havoc just for the Hell of it. He isn’t getting one trucker’s son to shoot the other one with a crossbow, or any other ‘Loki’ style mischief – he is focused on eliminating Lester; Lester must be a very big threat to him.
I think the idea there is an organization to which organized crime turns when they need to find someone they want to punish or prevent from squealing on them is a good one. The ‘last resort’ option. Malvo screwed up when he knocked off Hess for Lester. His sense of right and wrong led him to ultimately create the scenario where he was killed. He shoulda, coulda, laughed at Lester’s problems, but he decided to get involved. He wanted to see if Lester could be turned into ‘Malvo-II’, I suppose, after the sheriff began to suspect that Lester had some unexpected help with Hess, and Lester surprised Malvo by being able to take charge of his life by killling his wife…