The first two paragraphs remain. YOU tie it all together in the last paragraphs… Let’s say 6-10 total. Make it intriguing. Make it hilarious. Make it ironic. Make Mary a hooker. Make the school fly away like a spaceship. Do whatever you want. But most importantly, entertain me. Oh, and finish the story. Perhaps we can get it handed in by next Friday the 27th.
I’M KIDDING!!! Here goes:
"If Mary could have had a worse experience with Donovan Dry Cleaners, she would have burned the place down. It was an outrage to her and her alone that it cost nearly ninety dollars to release five suits from them, as others paid easily twice that amount for home delivery. She had dropped off six, but according to their computer, the grey and satin pantsuit was going to be with tomorrow’s annexed order coming from an outside source, probably around 10 a.m., but they couldn’t be sure. Although they promised that there would be no charge, this helped very little. School has already begun, and the extra moments in the morning became fewer as each new day of September matured.
The boys were being patient up to a point but it was threatening to rain. In Mary’s recollection of junior high, kids in general wouldn’t look forward to their second day of school quite the way Scott and Adam were. But keeping the new sneakers clean until homeroom was the goal. Mary agreed with this mentality as they were quite expensive, as just about any aspect of raising two teenagers could be. She had also purchased new sneakers for herself when the boys got theirs, but she was forced to choose one of her other suits for today since Donovan screwed up with her grey one, making her new sneakers a total mismatch for the outfit. And it started to rain heavily as she pulled away from the middle school."
GO!!!