Finish the "Star Trek" story: Discussion/control thread

Commendable, but it’s everyone’s storyline. Each writer should build upon what came before. Rule 5. If someone goes off on a tangent you didn’t intend, and it’s important to you, you may (if you can plausibly do so) nudge the story back on the track you had in mind.

Curse you, Elendil’s Heir! :slight_smile:
Gul Shket saves the universe, escapes durance vile in the Franklin’s Brig.
I get him home safely. Take a little time off from the Obsidian Order, drink a little kanar, play some Trivial Pursuit with the three wives, abuse a few peasants…
But no, you bring him back to Pelleri, and I have to save someone from writing him as a villian… :smack:

Hehehehehehehehe.

He’s too good a character to exeunt stage left just yet.

Thanks for the kind words about Collins. After I’ve had some coffee and given some thought the spatial anomoly from the earliest posts and the situation on Pelleri, I’ll be back in the game.

I like filling in the details and making things hold togehter and seem plausible (like why didn’t the Franklin already scan the dilithium on Pelleri). I hope that’s okay.

The Pur’eem Family Estate.
Distiller by Rotal appointment for 523 years.
“When you drink our kanar, you can’t tell the difference between Gul Dukat and Benjamin Sisko!”

Royal Appointment.
Nor can you spell. :slight_smile:

Is that canon, or did you pull it out of your Jeffries tube? :slight_smile:

A complete Clean-and-Jerk.

Spelling nitpick: “Jefferies” tube (named after Matt Jefferies, a TOS set designer and prop maker, IIRC).

Carry on.

Corner Case, you wrote in your latest post:

*As with the Trun, Michael handled all of the smoozing and cat-and-mouse negotiations.
*
Who’s Michael?

carnivorousplant - Pellerian kids play Dreidl? Let me guess, Pelleri weekly religious services are held in the evening on the 6th day…
and, yeah, who is Michael? The only Michael we have so far is Dr Fletcher. He wouldn’t be spearheading a diplomatic negotiation, would he?
btw - Fletcher hates being transported

Did the other kids beat you up and steal your lunch money? (Funds provided by parents to purchase the noon meal at public schools.) :slight_smile:

No, they just watch South Park on Alpha Quadrant Cable.

In Post #19 it says,

Since she’s musing to herself, I didn’t think she would use his full name in her thoughts.

Don’t be surprised if my contributions become less frequent.

Very sorry to hear that, Lute. Come back when you can. We’ll miss you.

{{{Lute}}}
Hopefully we can keep the story going for a while so when you come back we’ll still be here.

Meanwhile, I like how things are going on Pelleri, but I don’t know enough Trek Science to speculate on what the science officer and the alien officer discovered - so I took the story back to my gal :smiley:
quick question to the creator of the elongated warp bubble - is it anything like a slip stream?

Ouch. Don’t make me shove you out an airlock in your underwear.

I’ve been thrown out of classier joints than this…

Do we know the composition of the Frankling away team and their arms?
There are three Cardassians with sidearms unless everyone is supposed to be unarmed, in which case they have some concealed cutlery less they feel improperly dressed.