Nitpick: Dorothy, Moss’s daughter, was no longer a baby when she was killed; she was school-age. But yeah, that wiped out any sympathy I had for Pomeroy.
I think Dowling’s days might be numbered. More references to his unhealthy weight, plus he took time to praise Toricelli, his [del]successor[/del] adjutant. I can see a massive coronary in the near future; I just hope he can liberate Camp Determination before that.
I also wonder about Flora Blackford. Taft might become her friend-with-benefits, or he might be poised to take over her storyline if, as she speculated, she becomes the target of a people bomb.
Turtledove and his repetitions, I swear. Okay, so we no longer have to hear about how Pomeroy hates Americans, and now we won’t have to hear about how odd Scipio looks, to whites, in his tux.* But now we’ve got, Michael Pound does not want to be an officer, Leonard O’Doull is used to speaking French, and every other character thinking “For better or for worse—no, for better and worse…”
One interesting real-world parallel. We’ve seen quite a few people live longer than they did in our timeline, or take different paths, but I’d been wondering if/when we were going to see someone die earlier than they did in our timeline. Mr. Rilch didn’t know who the Navy man with a mouthful of teeth who lived on a peanut farm in Plains, Georgia and answered to a Miss Lillian was, until I told him. :wally It was cool, though, that Turtledove portrayed him as the alpha male of his community, even if that did mean he had to be taken out.
*Not that that’s not preferable to what we’re about to see him go through. I do look forward to hearing about Cassius; perhaps he and Moss will meet. But it’s still heartbreaking to think that Scipio lived his whole life just to come to this.