If LotR Had Been Written By Someone Else!?

With apologies to Spider Robinson…

It was the standard night at Callahan’s place. Drinks were flowing, the cigar box on the counter was full, and the fireplace was spilling over with glass. It was Tall Tales night - the night when people had to tell the tallest tales that they could, and the winner of the night’s competition would get all of their drinks for free. Needless to say, every hand had a glass in it, even though the competition was down to the final two competitors. Now, mind you, I was one of the last two competitors of the evening - and I sure wasn’t going to pay my tab. But my opposition was steep - I was up against the Doc, and he’s not an easy one to beat. The topic of the evening was books, and it seemed that we’d turned to Tolkien for the final competition.

“You know,” began Doc, settling heavily back in his chair and waving a meaty hand airily, "I don’t believe I’ve told a story about my friends from Rivendell recently. Pretty place, Rivendell - full of trees and pretty arches and a flowing river.

“Anyhow, I was breezing through there one day when this horse came pounding up behind me. There was this woman on it, and she was hanging on to this little short kid who looked like death warmed over. Needless to say, I was called immediately into action. We got the kid into a bed in the best house in town, and I got to work.”

Someone, sotto-voce, muttered, “Can’t be the best House in town - that’s Sally’s Place.”

The Doc, nonplussed, turned his eyes in the direction of the unknown heckler, and blithely continued uninterrupted. “So anyhow, I look over the kid, and there’s not a sign of injury or assault on his person - except that his skin was cold as death, and his face white as a sheet. But he had this ring on him - pretty thing it was, too. It was hanging on a chain around his neck. For some strange reason I almost thought it’d fit me, but then it hit me - and I knew what’d happened. I talked to the other medical folks in Rivendell, and they agreed with my diagnosis. Shame, too - it was incurable.”

“What was your diagnosis?” said Callahan from behind the bar, leaning his chin into his hand as if to hold his head up.

“Oh, that’s simple,” said the Doc. “He ring’d his neck.”

A few glasses hit the fireplace as a communal groan went up - but I saw my advantage. The Doc’s final efforts were not his best tonight, and I had an opening for my own attempt.

“Well,” I drawled, stretching out my legs a bit from my own chair, “the Doc might hang out in Rivendell, but I always preferred the Shire. Those boys know how to party, let me tell you - always had pipes smoking, food was plentiful at any hour of the day, and they had elevenses.”

“Elevenses?” queried Long-Drink from across the room.

"Yep, elevenses - and they dressed to the nines while they had 'em, let me tell you. Anyhow, I recall this one particular party that I went to. It was for some guy named Baggins who’d just had his hundred and eleventh birthday. The whole town turned out for that one, and it looked like it was going to be great - eighteen-course dinner, fireworks provided by Gandalf and Co., the works. Dancing and singing, everything you could imagine in a great party.

"Anyhow, the night was getting along, and Old Man Baggins got up on this stage to say a few words. Now, me and Hattie Hornsfoot were off in a corner chatting, but she went running over to her family when the old guy got up to talk, so I was left to my own devices. And boy, could he talk. ‘Baggins and Boffinses,’ he began, then listed off this humongous listing of names - so many, in fact, that he could’ve likely written a whole book about them.

"So anyhow, there I was, off to one side of the party with a mug of stout and a smile, and this grey-robed guy with a pointy hat nudged me, then jerked his chin off to one side, like he wanted me to follow him. I got the picture right away, and sidled off after him. But then, I heard the shouts, and I started back towards the party - sounded like someone’d just killed someone, and I figured I had a bit of practice with breaking up a fight.

"That party’d gone to the dogs quickly, that’s for sure. People were screaming and hollering, and the Proudfoots - or is that Proudfeet? - were busily bashing the Boffinses with their steins. A cluster of Hornblowers were screaming at the Old Took… a bad move that is, since the Old Took can holler with the best of them. And my good friend Hattie was in the middle of a cluster of Brandybucks who looked like they were about to explode. I started towards her, then tripped over something and turned around to see what it was.

"There wasn’t anything there - or, at least, it didn’t look like there was, and then that old geezer Baggins appeared in front of me. “Quick!” he hissed. “Get behind me and shut up - you won’t get beat.” And he was being truthful - there was a pack of Proudfeet coming my way, and it looked like I was up for a bruising.

“So I got behind Baggins, and he suddenly vanished - and there I was, all in my lonesome, with a batch of hobbits bearing down on me. I did what any self-respecting guy would do and froze and didn’t move a muscle, hoping they’d think I was a bush. But did you ever hear that an invisible hobbit is still opaque enough to hide whatever’s behind him? Surprised the heck outta me; I still felt old Baggins in front of me, and even tugged on his coattails once when one of the drunk hobbits swaggered closer, but not a single one saw, and eventually Baggins whispered that it was safe, and we made a break into the woods.”

“Is dere a point to dis whole rigamaroles?” Fast Eddie asked, lounging against his piano.

“Yup. It all comes down to one thing, which is great to remember for any parties in the Shire - I’d rather have a hobbit in front of me than have a bottle lobotomy.”

A hailstorm of glasses hit the fireplace, Fast Eddie played a ‘wah-wah’ on the piano, and I knew I didn’t have a tab to pay up as I left that night.

I started this. Feel free to add…

Scene 1: Captain Frodo, laying in bed, just staring up…

“Rivendell… Shit!”
“I’m still only in Rivendell.”
“Every day I stay here, I get weaker.”
“Every day Orcy squats in his hole he gets stronger.”
“Shit”
“Every hobbit wanted a mission. And for my sins they gave me one.”

Scene 2: Rivendell HQ

Unnamed General: “Good morning Captain Frodo. Have you ever seen me before or this other gentleman?”
Captain Frodo: “No sir.”
Unnamed General: “You’ve done a lot of work on your own, a lot of special ops, right?”
Captain Frodo: “I know of no such mission nor would I be disposed to speak of one if I did, sir”
Unnamed General: “Did you ever steal mushrooms from Farmer Maggott?”
Captain Frodo: “I know of no such mission nor would I be disposed to speak of one if I did, sir”
Unnamed General: “Have you ever heard of a Colonel Walter Sauron?”
Unnamed General: “He’s operating over the border in Mordor. His methods have become unsound. He’s operating without any decent, moral sense or restraint.”
Unnamed General: “We want you to terminate his command.”
Other gentleman: “Terminate with extreme prejudice.”
Unnamed General: “You will proceed up the Anduin river past the fallen bridge of Osgiliath.”
Unnamed General: “Once there you will make your way to Mount Doom and cast the Colonel’s Army academy class ring into the fire.”
Unnamed General: “Of course, this mission never happened.”

GROAN.

smooches Pixellation anyway Hee!

Welcome to the SDMB Pixillation, and congratulations on a stunning entrance.

As a major fan of Mr. Robinson’s, my hat’s off to you for catching his prose so perfectly. Allow me to cover your tab next time around, and b’god I do surely wish it could be at Callahan’s or its successor.

Why, thank you, Hometownboy. It’s all Liakela’s fault - she dragged me in, and since out of all the prior mess I hadn’t seen Spider done yet, I figured /someone/ had to do it.

Could’ve been worse, I suppose - a hobbit could’ve slipped Jake a Finn.

Ciao for now. :slight_smile:

“A Few Good Hobbits”

Boromir: You want answers?

Aragorn: I think I’m entitled to them.

Boromir: You want answers?

Aragorn: I want the truth!

Boromir: You can’t handle the truth! Son, we live in a world that has walls. And those walls have to be guarded by men with swords. Who’s gonna do it? You? You, Samwise Gamgee? I have a greater responsibility than you can possibly fathom. You weep for Gandalf and you curse the Orcs. You have that luxury. You have the luxury of not knowing what I know: that Gandalf’s death, while tragic, probably saved lives. And my existence, while grotesque and incomprehensible to you, saves lives…You don’t want the truth. Because deep down, in places you don’t talk about at parties, you want me on that wall. You need me on that wall.
We use words like Gondor, Pellenor, Ithilien…we use these words as the backbone to a life spent defending something. You use 'em as a punchline. I have neither the time nor the inclination to explain myself to a man who rises and sleeps under the blanket of the very freedom I provide, then questions the manner in which I provide it! I’d rather you just said thank you and went on your way. Otherwise, I suggest you pick up a weapon and stand a post. Either way, I don’t give a damn what you think you’re entitled to!

Aragorn: Did you try to take the ring?

Boromir: (quietly) I did the job you sent me to do.

Aragorn: Did you try to take the ring?

Boromir: You’re goddamn right I did!!

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:smack: Argh - sorry, didn’t realize my post would stretch the thread. Could someone edit to the right size please?

Eleisawolf, your Gorey was brilliant! Seriously. I got shivers!

Anyone willing to try a Sherman Alexie? I might, but I think I’d mess it up.

I’m beginning to wonder if this thread doesn’t top the “Most New Dopers Recruited” list for 2002…

Today, theonering.net! Tomorrow, the world! Bwaaahahahahahahahaha!

Speaking of new members…I registred just now simply to join this great thread.
So many potential litterary victims…but this would be my first choise: We’ve already had some Hemingway, but mostly reminicsent of the older papa, n’est pas?. So I can’t resist giving the Young Hem a go:

That autumn is was very pleasant, and we often went walking in the garden with the low sunligth in the clean, cold Rivendell-air, and there was always a breeze to send the leaves from the birch-trees swirling, and Arwen was very happy most of the time.

“Don’t we have a wonderful time together, darling?”
“Sure”
“We have such fun. The hobbits are such wonderfull people. Why havn’t we seen any more hobbits here before? If you would stay, we could invite more hobbits. Then we could give parties, and perhaps invite some more og your kin too, and we would have such wonderful fun.”
“You know I can’t stay”
“Of course. But would’nt it be grand?”
“Very. But it is not for now. You know that.”

She was quiet for a while. The she said:“I hate it when you do that.”
“Do what?”
“Say: You know that. I wish you didn’t ever say: You know that.”
“But you do.”
“Yes I do. But i don’t wna’t to. I hate that i know it. I hate everything they say about your blood and your war and about the terrible, terrible, miserable ring. I wish I had never heard of it. I Wish i didn’t know. But I do. And it is so terrible, and i wish we could stop talking about it.”
“It is easier to accept it if you understand it.”
“Will you please stop talking about it?”
“Sure. But you have to understand, it is just what is neccesary to do.”
“Will you pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease stop talking about it?”

We sat for some time and looked at the landscape in front of us. You could see the peaks of the mountains which were covered with the everlasting snow, and down below us the ravine streched out between the walls of the cliff, past the gates of Rivendell and out by the Bruinen and futher on into the plain beyond the hills. A single dark cloud drew across the pale blue autumn sky. It passed its way slowly over the horizon, carried high by the blow of the eastern wind. A small white tree in front of us caught the wind too and swayed almost down to the gruond beneath it.

“I’m sorry” she said. “I was unfair.”
And then:“I did not mean to be unfair. I just go a little crazy sometimes. Can you forgive me?”
“Of course”
“It’s just that I hate thinking of it.”
“So do I.”
“So we won’t talking about it again, will we?”
“No”
“Good. Because I hate talking about it.”
She had sat very straigth and tall, but now suddenly she seemed very tired and she leaned against my shoulder.
“Will you put your arm around me?”
“Sure”
I put both my arms around her and held her close, and she said: “Don’t you wish you weren’t going?”
“I do” I lied.

Later, after I had gone of with the Company, that small white tree wich had been blown so heavily about by the wind that day, was torn up by the winter storm and cut up to be used as firewood, but in the end everyone passed the sea before it was put to use . But at that time we were in Lorien, and noone thought anymore of Rivendell then.


Hope some liked it.
Sorry for spelling etc., english is not my first language as you migth have noticed

(Apologies for typos)

If I had been honest with Gandalf from the start then it might have been different. But generally my lack of forthrightness has been my downfall on numerous occasions and the consequences had generally been no worse than to send me into weeks long fits of misery and depression and re-ordering my record collection based on such mundane criteria as where I bought the album or which memebr of my family it reminded me of. And most of my lies or half-truths at that time revolved around football, or more specifically The Shirenal Gunners. For example, there was Milicent Lowtree, with a fantastic bosom and far too much sense for me. But here we were together when she asked me to have dinner with her folks on a night that we both new was scheduld for the Gunners and the Archers of Aragon in a replay of an earlier match when Hicklefit missed an open net in extra time. But instead of explaining to her the impossibility of me not going to Shirebury that Saturday, I agreed to go to dinner, knowing full well that I would never make it. And I made up some excuse, which she didn’t believe, and we broke it off. And in hindsight I suppose I should have simply told her at the tim, “No dear, I cannot make it becasue the hobbits have a game, right, so you see it is an impossibility.” But then ,and even now that sounds hooribly inept and pathetic, so of course I found it far easier to take the other path.

And this is exactly what happened with Gandalf, when he asked me to take the Ring to Mordor and destroy it, I agreed. But I knew that there would be know way, there was a game that night and countless others that I would have to miss should I make the journey. And I tried to beg off Gandlaf, asking how he could expect a lowly hobbit such as myself to carry the ring on such a dangerous quest, when in reality what I meant was, how could he expect to miss at least a half dozen league and Cup games to dispose of a ring that didn’t even belong to me. Gandalf tried to explain that only I could possibly reists the temptation of the rings power. It was rubbish as far as I was concerned, I had my own overwhelming desire, which was to sit in the North End with the other nutters. And if I had been honest with Gandalf and said there was no way because there was a game it might have turned out better. But again, like always in these situations, I choked on those words as being to ridiculous…

So I took the ring and made off as if I was on a quest to destroy the ring, when in reality the only quest I had was to get to Shirebury in time to claim my favorite spot in the bleachers. And on my way there I ran into a complete oddball who looked off by about ten and talked is a strange West End slurring dialect. He offered to take the ring to, or the “precious” as he referred to it, to Mordor. I agreed. As far as I was concerned this was a brilliant plan because I wouldn’t have to miss the game and the ring would, presumebly get destoyed.

This was one of the last days before the darkness overtook Middle Earth and one of my last happy memories becuase the Gunners pulled out a brilliant vitory with two strikes in the last ten minutes. So I like to think I made the right choice, although I am still not sure what became of the ring.

-Nick Hornsby

Charge at First Light - Tennyson

1
Tens of Thousn’ds, Tens of Thousn’ds,
Tens of Thousn’ds, more,
All towards Helm’s deep
Marched the dark core.
“Forward Fighting Uruk-hai
Take no mercy, make all men die!”
To destroy Helm’s deep
Marched the dark core

2
Such numbers, such reckless hate
Strength of Isengard so great
Now tho’ the soldiers feared
Feared a horrid fate.
Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die.
A few to stand to save Helm’s deep
Against all odds they dared

3
Masses the right of them,
Masses to the left of them,
Masses in front of them
Volley’d and thunder’d;
Storm’d at with rage and hell,
Boldly they fought and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of hell
Against all odds they dared.

4
“The battle we have bared
The despair we have shared
I will not end here snared
Backed into a corner
Without forth having dared
For an end worth a song.
The end will not be long;
At dawn sound Helm’s horn
Ride forth, I will charge them strong
May we cleave a road,
Now will you ride with me,
Son of Arathorn?”

5
One last time, hear Helm’s horn sing
With the sunrise, hope will bring
Helm for Theoden King!
“Forth, Eorlingas!”
In the east, clothed in white
Hope arrives, joins the fight
Rohirrim, cloaked in light
Just in time, welcome sight
For the Helm, dark core smite
Til no more sabers ring
Battle comes to pass

6
When can their glory fade?
End worth a song they made!
Fate of Middle Earth spared.
Honor the charge they made!
At first light they braved,
Against all odds they dared!

Frodo stood near the fiery chasm, struggling with himself.
How he wanted to claim the Ring for his own – how he needed
it! He pulled it from the Reed Urn that Aragorn had given him
to carry it in, and placed it on his finger.

But even the foul Ring of Sauron could not completely dominate
the will of a hobbit, so long as he was truly good and stuck
to his principles. Frodo held, with his last strength, to the
image that had sustained him through all of those miles in the
wasteland: Rosie, as he had seen her swimming, not knowing that
she was being watched. How enticingly her breasts had bounced!
With despair, Frodo realized that he would never learn what
kind of panties she wore, and he took another step towards the
brink. If he could not force the Ring from his finger, he
would throw himself into the pit.

But the Ring had a last trick to play. It clamped ever tighter
on his finger, sending waves of agony through his body. Frodo
stumbled and fell, and as he sprawled, he flung his arm out
to break his fall. The Ring suddenly dropped from his hand,
and heeding its call, Gollum came scrambling…

The song of Theoden, by John Lennon/Paul McCartney

When I find myself in times of trouble
Orcs as far as I can see
And my men are fading, just like me!
Helm’s Deep’s a trap, they told me
And orcs standing right in front of me
Shouting nasty warnings, “Let it be!”
"Let it be, let it be
"Let it be, let it be
“You will see no morning, let it be!”

We are no broken-hearted people
Hiding from the enemy
We’ll still kick some orc ass, with great glee!
For though those orcs are mighty
There is still a chance so we’ll be free
Let’s kill orcs, my brothers, you and me!
You and me, you and me
You and me, you and me
Let’s go kill some orc scum, You and me!

And when the night is cloudy
And those orcs are hard for you to see
Shine your torch upon them, and you’ll see!
You’ll see their nasty teeth and eyes
Your stomach will quite disagree
But you must keep fighting, just like me!
Just like me, just like me
Just like me, just like me
Yes, you will keep on fighting, just like me!
Just like me, just like me
Just like me, just like me
Yes, you will keep on fighting, just like me!

GOLLUM – by Voltaire

CHAPTER 1

How Gollum met his Precious, and what came of it

There lived in Middle Earth, among the riverfolk, two young hobbit-like folk: Smeagol and Deagol. Smeagol was of a family of high repute, and was himself very inquisitive and curious-minded, and interested in roots and beginnings. He would tunnel and burrow and dive into deep pools, his eyes constantly looking downward. His friend Deagol had similar interests, and was sharper-eyed but not so quick and strong.

One day they were out fishing, and Smeagol got out to nose around the banks while Deagol remained in the boat fishing. Suddenly, a great fish took Deagol’s hook, and before he knew it, he was pulled out of the boat and dragged deep into the water, to the bottom. Seeing something shiny, he let go of his line, grasped at the object, came up sputtering with a handful of mud, and swam for the bank. When he washed the mud away, he beheld a golden ring.

Smeagol had been watching over his shoulder, and insisted Deagol give him the ring. He insisted it should be his, as it was his birthday, and he wanted it. Deagol would not part with it, so Smeagol strangled him and took it from him, because the gold looked so bright and beautiful. He put the ring on his finger, called it “my precious,” and wouldn’t let it out of his sight.

Upon returning home, he recognized its powers of invisibility, and used it to crooked and malicious purposes, all whilst muttering and gurgling to himself. Over a time, he became hated and shunned by his relations, they called him Gollum and banished him from his home. For a time he wandered lonely, feeling sorry for himself, eating raw fish, until eventually he came to hate the sun and took up shelter in a cave in the Misty Mountains. For awhile, he vanished from all knowledge.

Until an unlikely soul happened by, and the ring abandoned Gollum, only to be found by an unsuspecting hobbit. Proving admirably that there cannot possibly be an effect without a cause – that in this best of all possible worlds, the precious was the most powerful of all rings, and with a will of its own … it did not wish to remain with a spent creature deep in a cave, unused. Observe: fishes are made for eating, fingers are made for rings, pockets are made for holding things, and rings of power are made to control others. It is clear, that things cannot be otherwise than they are, or since everything is made to serve an end, everything necessarily serves the best end.

Thus of this cause and this effect, the ring left Gollum, in this most beautiful and agreeable of all possible caves.

LoTR a la Evangeline, by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

This is the forest Fangorn. The murmuring pines and the Ents,
Bearded with elf moss, and in garments silk, indistinct in the twilight,
Stand like Elves of eld, with voices sad and prophetic,
Stand like Hobbits hoar, with beards that rest on their hairy feet.
Loud from its rocky caverns, the deep-voiced neighboring ocean
Speaks, and in accents disconsolate answers the wail of the Ents.

This is the forest Fangorn; but where are the hearts that beneath it
Leaped like the deer, when he hears in the woodland the voice of the
huntsman?
Where is the thatch-roofed village, the home of Rivendell farmers–
Elves whose lives glided on like rivers that water the woodlands,
Darkened by shadows of Sauron, but reflecting an image of Lothlorien?
Waste are those pleasant farms, and the farmers forever departed!
Scattered like dust and leaves, when the mighty blasts of the Second Age
Seize them, and whirl them aloft, and sprinkle them far o’er the ocean.
Naught but tradition remains of the beautiful village of Rivendell.
Ye who believe in affection that hopes, and endures, and is patient,
Ye who believe in the beauty and strength of Arwen’s devotion,
List to the mournful tradition still sung by the pines of the forest;
List to a Tale of Love in Rivendell, home of the happy.

(this is just Evangeline, slightly modified)

Man, these just keep getting better and better.

More Frogers and Sammerstein!
(Oklahoma style!)
The Shire (from the musical of the same name)

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh-- The Shire
Where the wind comes sweepin’ through the hills,
And the gardens hoed, with PO-TAY-TOES,
Are enough to give a hobbit thrills!
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh-- The Shire
Where we sit and drink a pint or two,
Where it’s quite a treat to wash one’s feet
Cuz there’s really not that much to do!

We know we belong to the land
And the land we belong to is grand!
And when we saaaaaaaaaaaaay–
“It’s here we want to staaaaaaaaaaay!”
We’re only sayin’
We’re doing fine in the Shi-ur,
In the Shi-ur
T-H-E S-H-I-R-E
In the Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiire! HEY!!

Sun Tzu as Sauron – The Art of Using Rings of Power (excerpts)

If a ring-bearer who heeds my will bears the ring, I am certain to win. Retain him! When one who refuses to adhere to my will bears the ring, he is certain to be defeated, Dismiss him!

All rings of power are based on deception.

Offer the bearer a bait to lure him; feign innocuousness and snare him.

Feign ignorance and allow him to believe the ring of power can be used for his will.