Well, waterj2, according to my father, who majored in English, you put spaces between words. I’ll ask my mother later; she works in documentation.
Beyond that, I find it looks better, and I haven’t heard that before. Good question to raise, though. I’ll start a thread in GQ later on, if you don’t.
“4. To help UncleBeer I’d love to take your sentences apart, but there are so many errors it would take a few hours. I don’t ahve (sic) that kind of time, you see, because my life is not dependent on posting on a message board to rile people up.”
“1. Have isn’t spelled avhe.”
A few more correct spellings to keep in mind for future posts:
retch
gaffe
remunerated
No need to thank me; just knowing I’ve helped make a difference is reward enough…
You appear to have plenty of time, especially to be a pompous little do gooder. It appears to chap your ass not getting paid. You mention it twice. Blow Daddy!:
“Now, onto this whole issue of my sense of civic duty . . . do you mean the parts where I refereed youth soccer for free on weekends, walking to the games instead of driving, or do you mean the part where I taught classes at my church (again, for free) . . . or perhaps my part in raising a guide dog some years ago? I’m not yet able to run for public office, so I don’t think you can much complain there, but I did my part to be an educated voter.”
Maybe Christ (I assume you are Christian, a symptom) can help you with your horn section. I am sure he approves.
“Oh, her getting a long, big scholarship to attend graduate school at UC-Berkeley (with one of the best graduate English
program in the country, if not THE best) is evidence enough of the respect she commands.”
So you are telling me that she is too smart to go one of the best graduate English programs in the country? Is she too smart for any college? Is that what you mean? 85% of all graduate students have huge scholarships. Over 60% get a full ride. You are logically inconsistent.
How old are you? I I feel like I am trying to beat sense into a child.
remunerated? Rocket88 is a lord of chaos.
iampunha, you’re not from Texas, are you?
I repeat, remunerated
Check it out at:
http://www.m-w.com/netdict.htm
then kneel before your lord. 