Can You Haiku?

I’m sitting here doing laundry at midnight and using my landlord’s detergent and I’m thinking… lets write some haikus.

For those of you who don’t remember, haikus are poems that are 3 lines long and have a syllabic structure of 5-7-5 (syllables per line). I’ll do a feeble attempt at writing one.

naked at my comp
dat bitche’s detergent’s fine
now my ass won’t smell


Mc[Ph|st]Y Cheesehead

“Software is like sex, it’s better when it’s free.” -Linus Torvalds on the software industry.

There’s also supposed
to be one word to tell you
what season it is.

So that ain’t a haiku. :slight_smile:


Haiku can be good
But often times it is just
Too painful to read


If you feel that you must suffer, then plan your suffering carefully–as you choose your dreams, as you conceive your ancestors.

Phaedrus? This is you again, isn’t it?
Gosh you must lead a boring life.


I could hear you not saying anything. You’ve got the loudest silences I ever did hear from anyone who wasn’t dead! Granny Weatherwax

Anybody who would write a haiku would eat peanuts with a straw.

It’s a barren art form with no redeeming qualities.
People write haikus
And hope that they’ll impress me.
Trust me, it won’t work.
Damn! See what you made me do, Cheese?


A seminar on time travel will be held two weeks ago.

Not mine, but a great Spam Haiku:

Oh, Argentina!
Your tin of potted meat soars
Above the pampas!

When done correctly,
I like haiku very much.
Otherwise, it sucks.

– Sylence


I don’t have an evil side. Just a really, really apathetic one.

The flaming folders
anger me, I must admit
But the smileys rule

:smiley:

Dunno if he’s Phaedrus, but this link is his ICQ information. It appears that he’s a Canuck. Beyond that, I am as baffled as y’all are.
http://wwp.icq.com/scripts/srch.dll?Uin=54469607

Coldfire


“You know how complex women are”

  • Neil Peart, Rush (1993)

You are a 21 year old nerd, who is fat (that means overweight), can’t score a date, sucks at web-page design, and your name is ummmm Ryan? Also you are from or in Canada, and you are mentally enfeebled. K? :stuck_out_tongue:


I could hear you not saying anything. You’ve got the loudest silences I ever did hear from anyone who wasn’t dead! Granny Weatherwax

Tennhippie
Master of limerick
Poem God


“People must think it must be fun to be a super genuis,
But they don’t realize how hard it is
to put up with all the idiots in the world.”
– Calvin and Hobbes
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that was a mini haiku- a 3-5-3 combo… yeah, that’s the ticket


“People must think it must be fun to be a super genuis,
But they don’t realize how hard it is
to put up with all the idiots in the world.”
– Calvin and Hobbes
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/

I might scan
A great haiku—
But I prefer
THIS form; don’t you?

BURMA-SHAVE

My posts are missing!
I had two-hundred seven
Before the “Upgrade”

My posts are missing!
I had two-hundred seven
Before the “Upgrade”

heh…

just building my count back up…

A long-lost thread found,
Rescued from oblivion.
Sorry - I was bored.
:slight_smile:

The wife of the man
Who invented high-heel shoes
Invented the tie

or this one from my old job when we had a Haiku frenzy:

With bulldog squeaker
Bonnie said it was OK
Merrily I skip

See she had this dog face on a gun handle toy that squeaked when you pulled the trigger and, ummmm, nevermind.

My Hiaku

clears throat

Chicken McNuggets
They are very bad for you
But they taste so good

Thank you!

bows and exits

Even one year on,
People still submit haikus.
What a useful thread.

Come to think of it,
I should win some sort of prize
For the longest bump.