I just finished writing my story called Chatterbox. It’s a short, three-page story I wrote over the span of about a month or two (one and a half pages one night, and the rest an afternoon a month later.) In any case, I’d like some feedback on it. Advice, questions, comments, criticism, etc are all welcome.
The story is at http://www.angelfire.com/oh5/badsites/chatterbox.html
Thanks.