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I made the following smartass remark in chat the other night and this post prompted me to do it again.
“Anthra” makes our host sound like one of the monsters Godzilla fought.
bad dubbing Oh-no! Look-out! It’s-the-giant-ant-Anthra! Its-plaintive-wail-is-oddly-reminiscent-of-k.d.lang! Run-for-your-life, Satsuki!
Coaly, dear, you know I kid because I love.
I want another one! We want more! We want more!
Way to go Anthracite. That was very well written. I enjoyed it very much.
and matt, I’ve read and liked yours as well.
Hey guys,
if you liked the stories above you might be interested in the new show I just read about “G-String Divas” on HBO. Much of it is steamy and very hot - it shows the girls with each other as well as with their clients (but it is also really interesting as it is a documentary and really talks to the girls about their life in the club and out).
Check the site out at http://www.hbo.com. It looks great.
The pitcures alone were very intriguing.
Well! That was an interesting and earnest effort, however, the friendly massage turning into eager action theme is a little well worn at this point in the annals of erotic story telling. Also, the movement to the down and dirty phase was a little speedy and could have used some delaying tension to heighten both the physical and literary climax of the story.
Some sexy and sophisticated clever repartee between the participants and possibly a bit greater initial resistance and then submission on the receiving participant’s part might also have made the seduction more engaging. Erotic context, precisely described situations, realistic human reactions and interior dialogs are some of the keys to well crafted erotica that engages you intellectually and emotionally.
A good effort.
The action part was nicely paced and the public dressing room location was an engaging touch. A good effort.
I don’t see a particular need to bump this thread just now, astro.
Closed.