My blood has begun to boil(experimental rant)

Pain hurts, but only for a minute
One hot night in hot hot bandages
Has left me aching for them
Never has such an incident
Left me so cold
and alone
Please end me
END ME, NOT NOW
SOME OTHER TIME
Because the pain hurts, but only for a minute
Stars heal, heat finishes
Supernova, then expanse
Into something other than pain

Geddy Lee is the new Virgil
In this coldfire supernova
He was forged into it
And now the duty is his
Now he leaves his post
To the place
he has come to fear the most
In the stars he finds himself
“Virgil, you am I
now and from now on
Realize it, move on
get ahold of yourself, man”

That is my rant and it is done.

April gets a bad rap;
Mr. Eliot, you were wrong–
December is the cruelest month.
Death is inevitable, but
the trees
close their eyes,
the animals deny
the winter’s lie
and sleep until
the Snake vomits up
the sun again.
Put the white blanket
up to your chin
and stop breathing
for awhile;
there’s a promise
beating in the
frozen ground,
but the silence
drowns it out.

You got dumped eh?

…dude, I didn’t know Kurt Cobain was familiar with Dante! You learn something new every day, I guess.

Well, maybe he’s familiar with Dante now

:smiley:

On a more sympathetic note ::patpats::

So does this count as a mod pitting? Judges?

Cool wind takes the last fall leaves
Curt Cobain is dead
Coldfire will not rake them.

:rolleyes: I said he was forged into the new Virgil by a coldfire supernova, not a Coldfire supernova, OTTO! :rolleyes:

It’s not often you see a two rolleye whoosh.

I was only kidding fellow

Did you hit your thumb with a hammer or something?

Nah, it’s just the issue of Geddy Lee refusing to take himself seriously about being the new Virgil. I’d expand on to as to what exactly that means in terms of the real world, but the answers you’d make would be much better.

Who’s Geddy Lee?

Are you a 13yr old girl?

Do you understand the concept of this board?

Why have I just used my eyes to read this tripe?

I want my money back…

Crappy internet poems
Such as those from Kurdt Kobain
Make poor Brutus sad.

This was painful enough reading it the FIRST time around.