Now that I’ve had a few days to think about it, here are my thoughts on the show overall: It had some high points:
-Sol
-Qimir
-Light Saber choreography
-In broad strokes, the setup for the plot/mystery
But too much else was a muddled mess. I found it impossible to figure out people’s motivations, and many of the “revelations” were underwhelming.
As an example, at a climactic emotional moment, Osha demands that Sol confess to killing her mother. And he does. But then instead of saying “things were so confused, she was turning into a shadow monster, I thought I was protecting you, I’m so sorry” he starts going on and on about the vergence and how they were one person not two and how he as trying to protect her. Or something. Which just highlights how unsatisfying so much of the story is, due to lack of context. What is a vergence? What would finding one mean? Does anyone ever go back to Brendock and keep looking for it? Why would the “truth” about Osha and Mae coming out matter?
Similarly, why is this coverup so important? Why does Vernestra think that “a jedi master went rogue and killed a bunch of people” is a more palatable cover story than “a mysterious baddie killed a bunch of people”?
And why couldn’t Mae go with Osha and Qimir at the end? And how would they “use her” to find them? Did she know where Qimir’s planet is? If so, couldn’t he just mindwipe that? Also, mindwiping? Since when?
(Note, by the way, that for all of the above, I’m not really asking anyone to answer them. I’m sure answers can be thought of. I’m just saying that I didn’t think the answers were provided in a particularly satisfying way in what we actually saw on screen.)
And while it’s certainly possible to come up with a plausible explanation for how a seemingly stone fortress could catch fire, it’s an odd choice to include that in the rashomon part of the story. The first time we see that, we see it from Osha’s perspective, in which she think she seems Mae start a fire, and then later on everything is burned. It’s just inviting us to assume that in fact something else is what really happened. Just seems like a careless and unsatisfying mislead.
Overall, I give it a D+. That said, I liked the good parts enough I’ll probably watch a season 2 if there is one.