Anyone want to read my first short sci fi story?

Actually, no its not. I’ve just noticed that. Doh!

Okay, can you send it to me at aro_hill@hotmail.com

It is on it’s way Aro.

Why of course I would like to read it. My profile e-mail address is current.
Thanks,
DT

Ok, DaToad. Am I gonna get any feedback anytime soon? It really is a short story.

Do you have aol or aim dorkusmalorkusmafia? I’d love to read your story and give it an amateur’s critiquing, but I don’t want to post my email address here for a few stupid reasons and I can’t send outgoing mail.

Hit me on aim if you can. SN = cisc0

Unfortunately, I don’t have AIM or AOL. You can email me at my SDMB screenname at yahoo dot com.

Another sci-fier here. Love to see it.

zorch@siutao.net

Thanks.

Everyone should have it now save Cisco. It is very short, so I hope to see some feedback sometime.

no

Me Too!

If anyone who has it also has aim or aol please send me an IM :).

Sent to Mr. Frink. I had a friend try to talk to Cisco but he didn’t get through.

I’d like to see it too. The profile email works.

I was passed out :frowning: . Sorry 'bout that.

dorkusmalorkusmafia

Why not put your copy on a web page. That way viewers can go to it and read it and then send comments to you. In this way, you wouldn’t have to mail a copy each time a new viewer requests it.

Just a thought.

LL

I would rather know exactly who has it, LowerLip. And it has been sent to Priceguy too.

Thanks Viva for your input.

Do you want the feedback here for discussion or should we email our comments to you?

Hmm, Please email it back to me. :slight_smile:
Thanks Sock.

Send it to jizz_master_zer0@hotmail.com that’s my “fake” email address that I use when I don’t want my real account to get spammed.

(My “real” email address also contains my real first and last name and I just don’t care to post that here for various reasons :))

Got it sent to you Cisco…or should I say, Jizzmaster. LOL great name!